GUIDED WRITING【话题呈现】为了弘扬雷锋精神，每年的 3 月 5 日被定为“学雷锋日”，但是随着改革开放以及经济全球化进程的加快，一些青少年受到了拜金主义、利己主义这些观念的影响，认为雷锋精神已经过时。请你以“Is Lei Feng Spirit Outdated?”为题写一篇短文，表达你的看法，短文开头已经给出。Is Lei Feng Spirit Outdated?Lei Feng was a typical hero in China, an excellent soldier, a helpful and kind person. Chairman Mao gave him such an epigraph “To learn from comrade Lei Feng” after his accidental death. For years the common soldier is always a symbol of selflessness. However, nowadays, somebody says Lei Feng Spirit is gone and outdated.注意：1.词数：150 左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。【文体介绍】根据话题呈现可以判断本篇文章属于议论文，要求考生对雷锋精神是否过时发表自己的看法。【写作指导】一、认真审题 本文关键信息为“雷锋精神过时了吗?”，然后围绕关键信息表达自己的观点。二、合理布局 本篇文章的开头语通过引入别人的观点交代了本文主题。因为是议论文，所以接下来作者需要明确表明自己的观点, 然后寻找证据支撑自己的观点。三、段落发展确定主要段落的发展模式。本文可以比较的方式为主线展开论述。作者可以先抓住关键信息，首先提出雷锋精神与现在提倡的和谐社会理念不谋而合，然后将和谐社会理念从不同方面与雷锋精神进行比较，最后通过两者之间的许多共同点引导读者自己得出结论“和谐社会的建设离不开雷锋精神”，从而间接反驳雷锋精神已经过时的说法。注意：可以使用表示比较的惯用词语，如：likewise,similarly, in the same way, the same as 等。【学生习作】Is Lei Feng Spirit Outdated?Lei Feng was a typical hero in China, an excellent soldier, a helpful and kind person. Chairman Mao gave him such an epigraph “To learn from comrade Lei Feng” after his accidental death. For years the common soldier is always a symbol of selflessness. However, nowadays, somebody says Lei Feng Spirit is gone and outdated.①I don’t agree with such a...
