专题十七短文改错2015～2011年各省市高考题Passage1(2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately，onthedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso，we'lllivetoregretit.答案WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately，thedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshaveshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryproblem.Thewebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.rareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustwaystoprotectenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso，we'lllivetoregretit.1.解析考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。答案第2句：think→thought2.解析考查冠词的用法。inthecountryside(在乡村)为固定短语。答案第3句：countryside前加the3.解析考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。答案第4句：or→and4.解析考查介词的用法。withthedevelopmentof...为一固定短语，“……意思是随着”的发展。答案第5句：on→with5.解析考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。答案第6句：去掉been6.解析考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。答案第6句：seriously→serious7.解析考查不可数名词的用法。air“”作空气讲时为不可数名词。答案第7句：airs→air8.解析考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。答案第8句：Much→Many9.解析考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。答案第9句：found→find10.解析考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。答案第9句：your→ourPassage2(2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Oneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysawparents.Momsaid“，Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.答案Oneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhis.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyashopwindow.Helikeditsomuchthathequicklywalkedintothes...
