陕西省榆林育才中学高中英语 Unit 4 astronomy Writing 导学案学习目标：训练提高综合写作的能力学习重点：查找习作中的错误并修改题目要求： 最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论，请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。30%的同学反对：1. 离我们及我们的日常生活太远； 2. 浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。70%的同学赞成：1. 已使用卫星进行通讯传播，天气预报等；2. 有望解决地球能源短缺问题.要点词汇：1. 某事值得做 sth. is worth doing 值得(花费金钱，时间)的 worthwhile 2. 日常生活 daily life 3. 饥饿 starvation 4. 卫星 satellite 通讯传播 communication5. 天气预报 weather forecast6. 能源短缺 energy shortages1. There are 30% of the students think that space is worth exploring. 30% of the students think that space is worth exploring. 错误诊断：there be 句型使用错误， 汉语式英语2. 70% students think that is worthwhile to explore space. 70% of the students think it is worthwhile to explore space. 错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用 of, of 之后的名词要有 the，that 是从句标记，从句中要有主语3. And had 30% the students are agree the idea of explore space. 30% of the students agree with the idea of exploring space. 错误诊断：have 的用法错误 百分数后用 of 连接名词 sb agree with sb/sb’s idea of 是介词，后用名词 或者动名词Summary 写说明文或介绍性的文章时，时态要用现在时；注意句子结构, 尤其是主句、 从句结构要清晰；状语部分要使用恰当, 不要逐句翻译。找出下面习作中的错误并修改，标注出你认为写得好的句子The discussion of seeking the space Today, our class had a discussion, which talk about if the seeking of the space have a worthwhile.Those who are in favor of seeking the space claim that it has a lot of advantages. For example, the satellite was used to communication and the 1whether forecast, also the seeking could make the earth full of energy.But some students...
