一、读写任务类——记叙文典例请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150词左右的文章。Ayoungmanwasslappedinthefaceuntilhebledbecausehedidn’tofferhisseattoawomanwithababyonabusindowntownHangzhou.Laterhewasprovedtobeadisabledperson.Inaseriesofcasesnationwide,weseepeoplebeingbeatenforrefusingtogiveuptheirseatsonpublictransport,whichseemstobeamoralproblemaboutcorrectbehaviorandself-sacrifice.Peoplewithmoraldeficiency (whodon’tgiveuptheirseatstodeservingpeople) canbecondemned,buttheydon’tdeservetobetreatedwithviolencebecausetheyoffendmoralvaluesbutnotlaws.Incomparison,theattackersbehaveworse.Theattackersregardrelyingonviolenceastheironlychoiceifpeopleignoretheirappealstogiveuptheirseats.Itseemstheystartashoutorafightforthesakeofjustice,butcantheystillthinkoftheirpersonalintentionwhentheycallviolencejustice?This“violentjustice”canconfusemanypeopleandencouragethemtodothesame,especiallywhenweareoverpoweredbyillogicalmood.Ifcruelandrudeactsarerootedinchildren’shearts,societywillneverstepintocivilization.Thepracticeviolatescommonvalues,neithersolvingproblemsnorsafeguardingcivilizedsociety.写作内容满分作文Thenewsisaboutayoungdisabledmanattackedonabusfornotofferinghisseattoawomanwithababy,whichleadsadebateaboutwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.Iamsoupsetthatinoursocietythewomanwithababyshouldbesoimpolite.Itwaswrongofhertogetherjusticewithviolence,whichwillreallydogreatharmtooursociety.Todayinoursociety,manyotherpeoplelikeherwouldtakeitforgrantedthattheyshouldbeofferedaseatonthecrowdedbus,asthemoralityrequires.However, ifIwereapassengeronthecrowdedbus,Iwouldstandouttotellherthattheyoungmanisalsoinneedofhelpbec阅卷老师点评1.层次分明,结构清晰本篇习作按照三段式:概括文章大意→谈谈自己对这则新闻的看法及感受→对于创建和谐社会自己的一些建议。按照这一顺序展开叙述,不但做到了要点齐全,而 且 富 有 层 次感。2.高级词汇的使用习作中用到了:dogreatharmto;take...forgranted; standout; inneedof; buildup; fightagainst; civilizedandharmonioussociety 等,显示了作者扎实...