（江苏专版）高考英语大二轮复习 专题5 书面表达 第二节 分类突破训练 一 读写任务类——记叙文学案 牛津译林版-牛津版高三全册英语学案

一、读写任务类——记叙文典例请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150词左右的文章。Ayoungmanwasslappedinthefaceuntilhebledbecausehedidn’tofferhisseattoawomanwithababyonabusindowntownHangzhou.Laterhewasprovedtobeadisabledperson.Inaseriesofcasesnationwide，weseepeoplebeingbeatenforrefusingtogiveuptheirseatsonpublictransport，whichseemstobeamoralproblemaboutcorrectbehaviorandself-sacrifice.Peoplewithmoraldeficiency (whodon’tgiveuptheirseatstodeservingpeople) canbecondemned，buttheydon’tdeservetobetreatedwithviolencebecausetheyoffendmoralvaluesbutnotlaws.Incomparison，theattackersbehaveworse.Theattackersregardrelyingonviolenceastheironlychoiceifpeopleignoretheirappealstogiveuptheirseats.Itseemstheystartashoutorafightforthesakeofjustice，butcantheystillthinkoftheirpersonalintentionwhentheycallviolencejustice？This“violentjustice”canconfusemanypeopleandencouragethemtodothesame，especiallywhenweareoverpoweredbyillogicalmood.Ifcruelandrudeactsarerootedinchildren’shearts，societywillneverstepintocivilization.Thepracticeviolatescommonvalues，neithersolvingproblemsnorsafeguardingcivilizedsociety.写作内容满分作文Thenewsisaboutayoungdisabledmanattackedonabusfornotofferinghisseattoawomanwithababy，whichleadsadebateaboutwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.Iamsoupsetthatinoursocietythewomanwithababyshouldbesoimpolite.Itwaswrongofhertogetherjusticewithviolence，whichwillreallydogreatharmtooursociety.Todayinoursociety，manyotherpeoplelikeherwouldtakeitforgrantedthattheyshouldbeofferedaseatonthecrowdedbus，asthemoralityrequires.However， ifIwereapassengeronthecrowdedbus，Iwouldstandouttotellherthattheyoungmanisalsoinneedofhelpbec阅卷老师点评1.层次分明，结构清晰本篇习作按照三段式：概括文章大意→谈谈自己对这则新闻的看法及感受→对于创建和谐社会自己的一些建议。按照这一顺序展开叙述，不但做到了要点齐全，而 且 富 有 层 次感。2.高级词汇的使用习作中用到了：dogreatharmto；take...forgranted; standout; inneedof; buildup; fightagainst; civilizedandharmonioussociety 等，显示了作者扎实...