（江苏专用）新高考英语一轮复习 层级3 篇章结构 第1讲 合理恰当的细节添加教学案 牛津译林版-牛津版高三全册英语教学案

第 1 讲 合理恰当的细节添加根据括号内的提示完成句子1．However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication. For_example,_many_people_begin_to_pay_less_attention _to_face to - face_communication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．2 ． At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and was_full_of_great _pride_and_confidence(充满了自豪和自信)．3 ． I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films, thus_making_ English_learning_more_interesting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．4 ． If_possible( 如 果 可 能 的 话 ), I'll take part in social activities so_that_I_can_ know_more_about_the_society(以便我能更多地了解这个社会)．5．I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To_my_joy,_they_made_rapid_progress_and_their_parents_thought_highly_of_me(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．6 ． Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try_to_make_ more_contributions_to_our_environment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．在书面表达的“注意”中有明确规定：1.词数 80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。适当添加细节的具体方法如下：1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明① 我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'll spend some time staying with my parents.→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.② 我看到了一些不良行为。I found some bad behaviours.→I found some bad behaviours. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.③ 我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.→I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much. Whenever I have time, I'll go hiking o...