高考英语 写作分析—思维和措辞的规律谈学案-人教版高三全册英语学案

思维和措辞的规律谈写作是一种乐趣。请认真阅读下面有关中学生自信心现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Self-confidence is an attitude which allows individuals to have positive yet realistic views of themselves and their situations. People who are not self-confident depend excessively on the approval of others in order to feel good about themselves. They tend to avoid taking risks because they fear failure. They generally do not expect to be successful. They often put themselves down and tend to discount or ignore compliments paid to them. 【写作内容】1. 用约 30 个单词概述饼状图信息的主要内容；2. 简要分析中学生培养自信心的重要性（不少于两点）；3. 根据你的分析，谈谈中学生自信心培养的途径和方法。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。概括：图：找趋势：学生普遍不自信找极端：不敢表现most students lack confidence especially in expressing themselves in pulic文：第 一 段 说 的 是 重 要 性 ： Sel-confidence plays a big role in shaping one's perspective. 第二段列举各种缺乏自信的后果，不要细说： Lacking confidence will do much harm.合并：Sel-confidence plays a big role in shaping one's perspective, while lacking confidence will do much harm. However, It is reported that most students lack confidence especially in expressing themselves in pulic. 要点二：思路：自信属于正能量的范畴，正能量的因素很多，譬如： motivation, purpose, passion, active, success, brave...而且互为因果，即：你可以说自信的人有激情，自信的人有目标等，同样，你也可以说有激情的人有自信，有目标的人有自信等。虽然这是套路，但鸡汤文不都是这样吗？所以读鸡汤文犹如看韩剧，看到开头基本猜到结尾。第一层：self-confidence is a constant source of passion.第 二 层 ： self-confidence encourages one to overcome whatever ge...