短文改错专题突破练171Lastmonth,IvisitedtheGreatWallofChina
Itwaspackingwithmanytourists
Asagirlfromsmallvillage,Ifounditwasdifficultyformetogetascenicphotoopportunity
However,thesettingwasreallyattractive
Visitingthiswonderwasatiringandabsolutelyunbelievableexperience,easyprovenbythoselargecrowdsaroundme
TheymademerealizedjusthowluckyIwastobethere
Howlonghavetheyallbeenwaitingfortovisitthiswonder
SawafriendofmineinBeijinggaveusanopportunitythatotherswishtohaveintheirentirelives
Forthat,Iamforevergrateful
答案Lastmonth,IvisitedtheGreatWallofChina
Itwaswithmanytourists
Asagirlfromsmallvillage,Ifounditwasformetogetascenicphotoopportunity
However,thesettingwasreallyattractive
Visitingthiswonderwasatiringabsolutelyunbelievableexperience,provenbythoselargecrowdsaroundme
TheymademejusthowluckyIwastobethere