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SectionⅤWriting—建议信建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。一、基本结构1．开头——说明写信的原因。2．主体——陈述建议的具体内容，并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处。3．结尾——希望自己的建议被采纳。二、增分佳句1．Itisreportedthatmoreandmorespeciesofwildlifearedyingout.2．Thereasonwhythenumberofthewildlifeisdecreasingisthattheirlivingplaceshavebeenbadlydestroyed.3．Inmoderntimes,withthedevelopmentofeconomyandtheimprovementofpeople'slife,moreandmoretreeshavebeencutdown.4．Ithinkstricterlawsmustbemadetopunishpeoplewhohuntfortherareanimals.5．Asaresult,theseendangeredanimalsevendieout.6．So,it'sthetimeforustoprotectourforestsandlivingenvironment.7．Onlyinthiswaycanwesavethemintime.8．Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.[题目要求]假如你叫李华，你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少，对此你向有关部门写一封信，分析造成这种现象的原因，并根据实际情况提出切实可行的几条建议。要点包括：1．野生动植物的现状；2．分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因；3．提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity.Yourssincerely,LiHua第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为建议信；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3．确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时。二、构思开头：描述现状。主体：分析原因，提出措施。结尾：提出希望。第二步：核心词汇想周全1．in_danger_of在危险中2．extinction灭绝3．with_the_development_of_...随着……的发展4．take_measures采取措施5．protect_..._from_...保护……免受……第三步：由词扩句雏形现开头：描述现状1．正如我们所知，许多野生动植物物种正面临灭绝。Asweknow,manyspeciesofwildlifeare_in_danger_of_extinction.主体：分析原因，提出措施2．这是因为野生动植物的生存环境遭到了极大的破坏。Thisisbecausetheenvironmentthattheyarelivinginhas_been_destroyed_greatly.3．随着城市的发展，水和空气被严重污染。With_the_development_ofcities,waterandairare_seriously_polluted.4．它们不仅缺乏食物，而且有时还会被人类猎杀。Theyhavelittletoeatandalsocanbe_killedbyhumanbeings.5．这些野生动植物是我们生活的重要部分，我们应该采取更多的措施保护它们免遭伤害。Thesespeciesofwildlifeareimportant_part_of_our_life.Moremeasuresshouldbetakento_protect_them_from_being_hurt.6．必须制定更多法律以阻止人们砍伐树木。Morelawsmustbemadeto_stop_people_from_cutting_down_trees.7．所有工厂在排废水之前必须净化废水。Allthefactoriesmustcleanthewastewaterbefore_it_is_poured_intoriversorlakes.8．建立更多的动植物保护区以便它们安全地生活。Morereservesshouldbesetupso_that_they_can_live_safely.结尾：提出希望9．我希望我的建议有帮助。Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpful.第四步：句式升级造亮点用notonly...butalso...改写句4They__not_only_have_little_to_eat,_but_also_can_be__killed_by_human_beings.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇DearSirorMadam,I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity.As_we_know,_many_species_of_wildlife_are_in_danger_of_extinction.This_is_because___the_environment_that_they_are_living_in_has_been_destroyed_greatly.With_the_development_of_cities,_water_and_air_are_seriously_polluted._Their_living_areas_are_becoming_smaller_and_smaller._They_not_only_have_little_to_eat,_but_also_can_be_killed_by_human_beings._These_species_of_wildlife_are_important_part_of_our_life._Personally,_more_measures_should_be_taken_to_protect_them_from_being_hurt._Firstly,_more_laws_must_be_made_to_stop_people_from_cutting_down_trees._Secondly,_all_the_factories_must_clean_the_waste_water_before_it_is_poured_into_rivers_or_lakes._Thirdly,_more_reserves_should_be_set_up_so_that_they_can_live_safely.I_hope__my_suggestions_are_helpful.Yourssincerely,LiHua