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层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语；2.句式单一，单句较多；3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子；4.不会使用从句；5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语；6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。因此，平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①(2019·北京卷书面表达)I’mverygladtoknowthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.→I’mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Ihopeyoucanconsidermyapplicationandallowmetobeavolunteer.→Ihopeyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsiderationandallowmetobeavolunteer.③(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)SoIcanserveasavolunteertoshowthevisitorsaroundthegalleryandIamsurethatIamfitforthejob.→SoIcanserveasavolunteertoshowthevisitorsaroundthegalleryandIamconvincedthatIamqualifiedforthejob.④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Asaresult,enoughpreparationisurgentlyneeded,includingpractice,nutritionandaperfectplan.→Asaconsequence,adequatepreparationisurgentlyneeded,includingpractice,nutritionandaperfectplan.⑤(2019·天津卷书面表达)Iwanttomakemyvoiceheard.→Ifeelanurgetomakemyvoiceheard.⑥OnlywhenyoudomorereadingandwritingcanyousucceedinimprovingyourEnglish.→OnlywhenyoudomorereadingandwritingcanyoumakeitinimprovingyourEnglish.⑦Toourgreatjoy,notonlyareourclasseslivelyandappealing,butourschoollifeisalsorichandcolorful.→Toourgreatjoy,notonlyareourclasseslivelyandattractive,butourschoollifeisalsorichandcolorful.⑧(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinthelastfewyears.Andthenewscamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.→Ourschoolhaswitnessedgreatchangesinthelastfewyears.Andwordcamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。①(2018·天津卷书面表达)Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouoncetookpartinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.→Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouonceparticipatedinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.②(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Moreover，wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumbuilt，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.→Moreover，wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumsetup，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.③(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Theteamwillholdmanyactivities，someofwhichwillappealtoyou，includingmanymatches.→Theteamwillholdarangeofactivities，someofwhichwillappealtoyou，includingmanymatches.词汇运用，短语优先当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语...