BEC中级写作电子讲义主讲:孙能武欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材第一讲BEC写作概述本课程安排简介写作共6次课,第1次讲概述。BEC写作简介:1写作目的与规定1Canmakenotesthatareusefultobothhim/herselfandtocolleagues.2Canwritemostlettershe/sheislikelytobeaskedtodo;sucherrorsasoccurwillnotpreventunderstandingofthemessage.3Canwriteasimplereport.写作考试共进行45分钟,占总成绩的25%,小作文占10分,大作文占20分。更多的报名信息和成绩查询措施请上网理解:.edu.cn教育部考试中心2测试范围与选材1、身份简介(PersonalIdentification)2、工作环境与平常事务(Theoffice,generalbusiness,environmentandroutine)3、接待与闲暇活动(Entertainmentofclients,freetime,relationshipswithcolleaguesandclients)4、商务旅行(Travel)5、健康(Health)6、购置与销售(Buyingandselling)7、企业构造、系统及程序(Companystructures,systems,processes)8、产品与服务(Productsandservices)9、成果与成就(Resultsandachievements)其外,还会波及其他的一般商务话题(Businessissues)。3测试题型分析AnOverviewofBECVantageWritingPARTFunctions/CommunicativeTaskInputResponseRegister1BusinessCorrespondence:e.g.givinginstructions,explainingadevelopment,askingforcomments,requestinginformation,agreeingtorequestsRubriconly(pluslayoutofoutputtexttype)Note,message,memoore-mail(40-50words)Neutral/informal2Correspondence:e.g.explaining,apologising,reassuring,complainingReport:describing,summarisingProposal:describing,summarising,recommending,persuadingOneormorepiecesofinputfrom:businesscorrespondence(mediummaybeletter,faxore-mail),internalcommunication(mediummaybenote,memo,ore-mail),notice,advert,graphs,chart,etc.(pluslayoutifoutputisfaxore-mail)Businesscorrespondence(mediummaybeletter,faxore-mail)orshortreportorproposal(mediummaybememoore-mail)(120-140words)Neutral/formal题型:1.商务便条类;2.商务便函类;3.商务书信类;4.商务汇报类注意:BEC不是单纯的英语考试,也不是考察商务知识。对策:学习、模仿高水平的论文例题解析:Youworkforacompanywhichproduceslaserprinters.Youarevisitinganothercompany,Softcell,tobuysomecomputersoftwareforyourdepartment.Theyhaveexpressedaninterestinyourcompany’sprintersandyouwouldliketotaketwentybrochuresandthreesampleprinterswithyou.有关词汇:laser,inkjet,projector(Barco),photocopier(Xerox),faxmachine,scanner,computer,monitor有关词汇:companyliterature;brochure;leaflet;flyer;whitebook;datasheet;prospectusWriteashortnotetoMr.JimAsano,theSalesManager.Askingforhispermissiontotaketheseitems.Explainingwhyyouwantthem.Mentioningthetimeanddatewhenyouwanttocollectthem.Write40-50wordsonyourAnswerSheet.便函便条类题目的构造Input:situationdescriptionTask:memo,note,emailcontentpointsWrite:internalmessage(40-50words)注意:格式;发挥部分要确切评分原则BEC写作评分措施级别第一部分分数5所有完毕答题规定所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题规定容许的状况下加以发挥语言规范、自然;错误至少,均属小错。多样化的语言构造和丰富的词汇量。组织效果好,注意前后呼应。语域和格式完全合适。给读者的印象极佳。9或10分4很好的完毕答题规定所有内容点都处理得不错。大体精确;运用复杂语言时有错误。构造合理,用词精确。大体上组织很好,注意逻辑关系。语域和格式总体来说合适。给读者的印象良好。7或8分3尚能到达答题规定所有的重要内容点已包括进去,遗漏了某些次要的内容。出现某些错误,但不阻碍交流。构造和词汇掌握范围适度。组织和安排总的来说令人满意。语域和格式尚可,虽然并不完全成功。给读者的印象很好。5或6分2不能完全到达答题规定遗漏了某些重要的内容点或者处...