短文改错(建议用时:40分钟)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1(·哈尔滨模拟)Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmywholelife!LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadsaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.Webegantoplaysnow!Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.Wewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateachother.2ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.3Asweknow,whenseniorstudentsfinishtheirschool,mostoftheirreferencebooksarethrownaway,whicharestillingoodconditions.Whatagreatwasteitis!Isuggestedthatweshouldrecycleallthisbooks.Ontheonehand,recyclingthemcansavealotofnaturalresources,whichareusedtomaketextbooks.Ontheotherhand,thenotesonthebooksarehelpfultowhoeverneedthem.Infact,recyclingtextbookshasbeenincreasingpopularinsuchcountriesasAmericaandAustralia.Weshouldlearnfromthem,butmakeeveryefforttobuildenergy-savingsociety.Inmyopinion,itisofmanybenefitbothtoourpresentandtoourfuture.4NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisrathercommon.Thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelpreduceit.Firstofall,knowexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.Secondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findingawaytorelaxyourselfoccasionally.Forexample,youcanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwithothers,suchas,yourclassmates,yourteachers,yourparents.Theywillunderstandyouandcometoyourhelpwhenyouarereallyinthetrouble.Inaword,nevergetyourselfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.答案解析1答案:Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinhavemywholelife!LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidifwellinhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraighttakeA’s,Dadsaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”wordVictor’sdreamwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,realforandthentookabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomeclimbedsnowonthetrees.Webegantoplay∧snow!Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedwithsnowbefore.Wewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateachother.them1.【解析】第一句had→have。主句谓语动词是一般现在时态,所以,状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态,不可能是过去完成时态。2.【解析】第二句because→if。在that引导的宾语从句中,又包含一个条...
