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写作指导襄阳36中杨婷ALetterofApplicationStep1Warminguprecruitmentposter:招聘海报curriculumvitae(CV)/resume:个人简历position:职位exchangestudent交换生multinationalfirm:跨国公司theHopeProject:希望工程Howtowritealetterofapplicationwell假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选一些优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：●对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处)●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）注意：1.词数不少于100词；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：晨曦希望小学:ChenxiHopeSchool真题回顾2010年天津卷Pairwork:Readtheletterbelowandfindouttheproblemsinit.请阅读以下学生作文，根据申请信的文体特点，仔细阅读,找出这封信存在的问题。DearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassone,SeniorTwo.IamveryhappytowritetoyoubecauseIwanttobeateachingvolunteertohelpthestudentsstudyEnglish.Firstofall,Iamfriendlyandhardworking.IamgoodatEnglishandeasytogetonwellwithchildern.IbelieveIamindependentenoughtotakecareofmyselfandpeoplearoundme.IfIgotchance,Iwouldtrymybesttogivethembestinstructionsandlearningmethods.Ihopeyoucanconsiderme.ThankyouforreadingandIhopeyoucancallmesoon.Sincerelyyours,LiHuaPara1:语言不够正式没有清晰的表明写信目的Para2:细节不够丰富，没有未来打算，没有连接词使文章连贯.Para3:没有表达对对方的感激，语气不够礼貌。申请信的3C原则1.Clear2.Correct3.Concise正确清楚精炼DearSirorMadam，________________________________________________________________________________Withallmybestwishes!YoursSincerely,LiHuaAimReason/Personality/QualificationGratitudeandExpectationStructureReadtheletter---Applicationthetopicofeachparagraph介绍自己身份，信息来源，表明写信目的表示感谢和期待对方优先考虑自己的申请。期待面试或回信，注意语气礼貌BodyEnding介绍学历，经历，个性，成就等，说明为何感兴趣和未来打算Linking:①Givingreasons：dueto;because;since;as…②Addition：Inaddition,also…HeadingBodyEndingHeading1.Iamwriting(thisletter)toapplyfor/to…2.Notonlycanvolunteerworkhelpmeenrichmyknowledge,butalsoIcanhelpmorepeople.Aimtoshowyourpurposeandreasonapply申请v.apply(tosb.)forsth.applytodoapplicationn.interest兴趣v./n.beinterestedin...expressone'sinterestin...bekeenon...对...感兴趣enrichmyknowledgeandexperiencebroaden/widenhorizonsReviewPara1reasons翻译：1.我写信是为了申请......2.1.志愿者工作不仅丰富了我的知识而且我能帮助更多的人Qualificationtoshowyouradvantages2.experience经验[U];经历[C]experienced经验丰富的adj.1.ability能力n.4.qualification(s)资格qualified具备资格的adj.havetheabilitytodo...gain(rich/valuable)experiencehaverichworkingexperiencebeexperiencedinsth/doing...bequalifiedfor/todo/tobe...3.personality性格品质n.outgoing,easy-going,reliable,open-minded,helpful,confident,teamworkspirit,responsible,independent...begood/skilledathaveagoodcommand/knowledgeof1.我在交流和团队合作上的兴趣和技能有助于......2.我会获得宝贵的经验并学会和他人合作。1.Myinterestandskillincommunicationandteamworkcontributeto/help......2.I'llgainsomevaluablejobexperienceaswellaslearntocoopetatewithothersbetter.Expectation1.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.2.I'dappreciateitifyougivemeaninterview.3.IwillbegratefulifIcouldgetthisopportunity.4.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinthenearfuture.toshowyourhopeundertakeresponsibilitymeetchallengesaccomplishtask...