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本节课的学习任务:写一篇描述人的外貌(look)、性格（characters）、爱好（hobbies）的文章short1.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?tallthinheavy/fatWhatdoeshelooklike?shorthairlonghairWhatdoeshelooklike?2.Pair-work:A:Whatdoesxxxlooklike?B:He/Sheis…A:Whatishis/hercharacter?B:He/Sheis…A:Whatdoeshe/shelike?B:He/Shelikes…描述外貌的单词：short,tall,thin，ofmediumheight，strong,good-looking,nice,slim苗条描述穿着的短语：wearaT-shirt,wearapairofglasses描述性格的单词：lazy,quiet,friendly,shy,kind-hearted善良的,polite有礼貌的，strict严厉的,out-going外向的描述爱好的短语：likereading,liketohelpothers,likeeating,likeplayingbasketball3.Wordcollection:4.Writesomethingaboutthisboy.(3-5句话)提示词：tall，thin，blackhair;wearshortsandaT-shirt;polite(有礼貌的)，happy•Thisismypenpal.HisnameisXiaoDong.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Heisverypoliteand.Heisahappyboy.5.Introduceyourself•Doitwithyourpartners以下信息可作为参考NamexxxAge15Looktall，thin，blackhair,bigeyesFavoritefoodfish，beef,vegetableFavoritesportplaybasketballFavoriteclassesEnglish,maths,PEThingshelikeslittledogThingshelikestodoplaywithhisgoodfriends,helpothersCharacter(性格)kind-hearted（善良的）,polite(有礼貌的)NameMaXiaotiaoAge15Looktall，thin，blackhair,wearshortsandaT-shirtFavoritefoodhamburgers，friedchickenFavoriteclassesscience,art,PEThingshelikeslittleanimalsThingshelikestodoplaywithhisgoodfriends,helpothersCharacter(性格)kind-hearted（善良的）,polite(有礼貌的)6.Writingtask:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词,开头已经给出。开头：MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.He…77..写作步骤写作步骤1)1)审题审题2)2)列纲列纲3)3)连句连句4)4)修饰句子修饰句子组织文章组织文章5)5)检查纠错检查纠错（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（适当运用承上启下的过渡词（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,,使文章更完整更精炼）使文章更完整更精炼）（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）及标点符号）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）8.Let’ssharesomecompositions.9.Pair-correction:Exchangeyourcompositionwithyourpartnerandcorrectthemistakeswithyourredpen.附：作文评分标准NameMaXiaotiaoAge15Looktall，thin，blackhair,wearshortsandaT-shirtFavoritefoodhamburgers，friedchickenFavoriteclassesscience,art,PEThingshelikeslittleanimalsThingshelikestodoplaywithhisgoodfriends,helpothersCharacter(性格)kind-hearted（善良的）,polite(有礼貌的)Writingtask:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词,开头已经给出。开头：MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.He…10.例文:MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.Heis15yearsold.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpsothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.11.Writeyourcompositionsagainafterthecorrections.Later,handinyourcompositionstome.