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模板__②__发言稿典例最近，你们班上将要组织一场以“Tobeselfconfident”为题的主题班会。你是英语课代表，请根据以下内容写一篇不少于120词的文章作为发言稿。开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。提示：1.简述自信的重要性。2．假设你以前缺乏信心……(1)谁给了你鼓励？(2)什么事让你改变了一切？3．可适当加入自己的评论。Girlsandboys，Lifeisbutahardandbitterjourney...【写作策略】1．仔细审题：(1)体裁：发言稿。(2)时态：一般现在时与一般过去时。(3)人称：第一人称。2．确定结构：(1)自信重要性。(2)自身经历。(3)自己的评论。3．筛选词汇：(lackof；selfconfident;success;encourage；trymybestto；等。)4．句型搜索：(I’dliketo...；Ifeelstronglythat...等。)5．组句成篇：(When...;Later;Sincethen...等。)【范文赏析】Girlsandboys，Lifeisbutahardandbitterjourney.Therefore，①Iwouldliketosay，“Nomatterwhathappens，beselfconfident.”WhenIwas14，②Isufferedfromalackofconfidence.Ididn’tdaretoanswerteachers’questionsinclassandwasafraidofspeakinginpublic.③Later，somethinghappenedandchangedmylife.Itwasaspeechcontestheldinourschool.④Mymotherpersuadedmetoparticipatebecauseshehadgreatconfidenceinme.Ichoseatopicmostappropriatetome—SelfconfidenceandSuccess.⑤Itriedmybesttorecitemywholespeechandpracticeditmorethan100timesbeforeamirror.Withmymother’sgreatloveandencouragement，Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.Sincethen，⑥Ihavefeltstronglythatselfconfidenceisthefirststeptowardssuccess.So，friends，beconfidentandyouwillhaveabrightfuture.【名师点评】★①是非常重要的句式，平实地道地表达笔者思想。★②准确真实地再现了缺乏自信时笔者自身的感受。★④母亲的鼓励促成了自己的超越。★⑤自己的努力与勤奋是获得成功的关键因素之一。★总体评价：语言运用得体，过渡自然；情感真挚，情景真实，有较强的感染力。【写作指导】Elegance(优雅)(原文)Soso(普通)(1)Therefore，IwouldliketoSoIthinkweshouldbeselfconfidentsay，“Nomatterwhathappens，beselfconfident.”whenanythinghappens.(2)WhenIwas14，Isufferedfromalackofconfidence.WhenIwas14，IwasnotconfidentatallandIexperiencedmuchdisappointment.(3)Mymotherpersuadedmetoparticipatebecauseshehadgreatconfidenceinme.Mymotheraskedmetotakepartinitandshehadgreatconfidenceinme.(4)Withmymother’sgreatloveandencouragement，Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest！BecauseIworkedhardandmymotherlovedandencouragedme，Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest！(5)So，friends，beconfidentandyouwillhaveabrightfuture.So，friends，beconfidentandhaveabrightfuture.【临摹翻译】1.范文佳句：Therefore，Iwouldliketosay，“Nomatterwhathappens，beself-confident.”临摹翻译：在我看来，无论发生什么事，我们都必须同样努力工作。Inmyopinion，nomatterwhathappens，weshouldworkhardthesame.2．范文佳句：WhenIwas14，Isufferedfromalackofconfidence.临摹翻译：现在的学生苦于大量的作业和睡眠时间不足。Many_students_nowadays_suffer_from_too_much_homework_and_lack_of_enough_sleep_time.3．范文佳句：Mymotherpersuadedmetoparticipatebecauseshehadgreatconfidenceinme.临摹翻译：老师最终说服他报名参加下周举行的英语演讲比赛。The_teacher_persuaded_him_to_enter_for_the_English_speech_contest_to_be_held_next_month_at_last.4．范文佳句：Withmymother’sgreatloveandencouragement,Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest!临摹翻译：在老师的帮助下，我的写作能力自去年以来得以很大的提高。With_the_help_of_my_teacher,my_writing_ability_has_been_greatly_improved_since_last_year.5．范文佳句：Sincethen,Ihavefeltstronglythatselfconfidenceisthefirststeptowardssuccess.临摹翻译：自从他来到这里，他每天都花一个小时练习英语口语。Since_he_came_here，he_has_spent_an_hour_practicing_spoken_English_every_day.6．范文佳句：So，friends，beconfidentandyouwillhaveabrightfuture.临摹翻译：更自信些，你将会赢得这场比赛。Be_more_confident_and_you_will_win_the_competition.