1第四周定语从句的写作一、写作中常用的几种定语从句1.关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who,whom,whose,that,which,as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点,尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。Asailorwhohasexperiencednostormwillneverbecomeanexcellentsailor.(2013·福建高考满分作文)没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月,月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。2.关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when,where,why引导的定语从句。Thereasonwhypeoplecelebratethefestivalisthattheybelieveitisthetimewhenthemoonisatitsfullestandbrightestinthewholeyear,andpeoplewillgathertogethereatingmooncakesandappreciatingthefullmoon.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们庆祝这个节日的原因是,他们相信这时候是一年中月亮最满、最亮的时候,人们聚在一起吃月饼、赏满月。3.“介词+which/whom”引导的定语从句Yearsofschoollifehavetaughtmealotofthings,ofwhichwhatstrikesmemostisthatweshouldtakecarenottohurtotherswithourwords,deliberatelyorbyaccident.(2013·湖北高考满分作文)多年的校园生活教会了我很多东西,其中使我印象最深的是我们应该尽量不要用言语伤害别人,无论是故意还是无意。[即时演练]用适当的关系词填空1.Thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety.(2013·广东高考满分作文)2.Asweallknow,cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork.(2013·广东高考满分作文)3.Myteacheradvisedmetorepeatthematerialsseveraltimesandreadthemaloud,whichtheythinkwillhelpimprovemymemory.(2013·四川高考书面表达)4.Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweworkedinthesmalltown.5.ShewaseducatedatBeijingUniversity,afterwhichshewenttohaveheradvancedstudyabroad.二、定语从句的写法2定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句,因此在写作时可采用“三步法”:第一步:写出两个简单句。第二步:在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇,这个词在两个简单句中都有。第三步:把另一个简单句改成定语从句,要特别注意引导词的选择。[示例]第一步:写出两个简单句。①TheforeignerisfromCanada.②Hevisitedourclassyesterday.第二步:在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇:theforeigner。第三步:用句②充当定语从句,theforeigner为先行词指人,句②中的代词he指代theforeigner且在句子中作主语,故用who或that作引导词。Theforeignerwho/thatvisitedourclassyesterdayisfromCanada.[即时演练]把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句1.I'vealwayslongedforthedays.Iwillbeabletobeindependentthen.I've_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent.2.Ihaveafriend.Herfatherisanengineer.I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.3.Theyplantedthetrees.Thetreesdidn'tneedmuchwater.They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didn't_need_much_water.4.Thisisthebestmethod.Itcanbeusedagainstpollution.This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution.5.Theysenttheelderlysomefruits,cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.Theelderlyalwaysfeellonely.They_sent_some_fruits_to_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely,_cleaned_the_rooms_and_had_a_good_chat_with_them.三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项1.误用关系词误:IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.正:IliveinBeijing,whichisthecapitalofChina.误:Ihaveafriend,who'snameisLiuMei.正:Ihaveafriend,whosenameisLiuMei.2.句子残缺误:ThereweremanystudentstookpartintheEnglishcompetition.3正:ThereweremanystudentswhotookpartintheEnglishcompetition.误:Thosewhoinfavoroftheproposal,pleaserai...