写作专题：第4周定语从句的写作VIP免费

1第四周定语从句的写作一、写作中常用的几种定语从句1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。Asailorwhohasexperiencednostormwillneverbecomeanexcellentsailor.(2013·福建高考满分作文)没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。2．关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when，where，why引导的定语从句。Thereasonwhypeoplecelebratethefestivalisthattheybelieveitisthetimewhenthemoonisatitsfullestandbrightestinthewholeyear,andpeoplewillgathertogethereatingmooncakesandappreciatingthefullmoon.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们庆祝这个节日的原因是，他们相信这时候是一年中月亮最满、最亮的时候，人们聚在一起吃月饼、赏满月。3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句Yearsofschoollifehavetaughtmealotofthings,ofwhichwhatstrikesmemostisthatweshouldtakecarenottohurtotherswithourwords,deliberatelyorbyaccident.(2013·湖北高考满分作文)多年的校园生活教会了我很多东西，其中使我印象最深的是我们应该尽量不要用言语伤害别人，无论是故意还是无意。[即时演练]用适当的关系词填空1．Thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety.(2013·广东高考满分作文)2．Asweallknow,cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork.(2013·广东高考满分作文)3．Myteacheradvisedmetorepeatthematerialsseveraltimesandreadthemaloud,whichtheythinkwillhelpimprovemymemory.(2013·四川高考书面表达)4．Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweworkedinthesmalltown.5．ShewaseducatedatBeijingUniversity,afterwhichshewenttohaveheradvancedstudyabroad.二、定语从句的写法2定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”：第一步：写出两个简单句。第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个词在两个简单句中都有。第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意引导词的选择。[示例]第一步：写出两个简单句。①TheforeignerisfromCanada.②Hevisitedourclassyesterday.第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：theforeigner。第三步：用句②充当定语从句，theforeigner为先行词指人，句②中的代词he指代theforeigner且在句子中作主语，故用who或that作引导词。Theforeignerwho/thatvisitedourclassyesterdayisfromCanada.[即时演练]把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句1．I'vealwayslongedforthedays.Iwillbeabletobeindependentthen.I've_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent.2．Ihaveafriend.Herfatherisanengineer.I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.3．Theyplantedthetrees.Thetreesdidn'tneedmuchwater.They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didn't_need_much_water.4．Thisisthebestmethod.Itcanbeusedagainstpollution.This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution.5．Theysenttheelderlysomefruits,cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.Theelderlyalwaysfeellonely.They_sent_some_fruits_to_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely,_cleaned_the_rooms_and_had_a_good_chat_with_them.三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项1．误用关系词误：IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.正：IliveinBeijing,whichisthecapitalofChina.误：Ihaveafriend,who'snameisLiuMei.正：Ihaveafriend,whosenameisLiuMei.2．句子残缺误：ThereweremanystudentstookpartintheEnglishcompetition.3正：ThereweremanystudentswhotookpartintheEnglishcompetition.误：Thosewhoinfavoroftheproposal,pleaserai...