四川省仁寿县城北教学点2012届高三英语二轮复习专题训练:短文改错+书面表达(1)写作(共两节,共50分)第一节短文改错(共l0小题;每小题l.5分,满分l5分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。OnedayIwentshoppingatagiftsshopinShanghai.66._______IwasveryinterestedandIlostmeinthebeautiful67._______goods.AfterIpaidforthatIhadbought,Ileftmy68.________]handbagonthecounter.Therewereabouttwothousand69.________yuaninit.Ihadalreadywalkedoutoftheshopwhile70.________ayoungshopassistantwalkuptomewithmyhandbag.71._______Heinsistedmycheckingit.Iopenedthehandbagand72._______foundnothinglost.Ithankedforhimandofferedhim73.________arewardof100yuan,butherefusedtotakeanything.74.________Iwasdeepmovedbyhisselflessactthatday.75._______第二节书面表达(满分35分)假设你是校刊英文版的编辑,请你根据下面表格中的内容写一篇题目为“TopMealoftheDay”的文章登在校刊上。现状许多高中学生不吃早餐(skipbreakfast),其结果不仅影响白天的学习而且导致身体变差。原因1.认为早餐不重要,可有可无;2.早晨时间匆忙,为了节省时间不吃早晨;3.(自定)建议每位学生都应该每天吃早餐。原因……(自定,至少两个)。要求:1.请按照要求使文章内容充实,上下文连贯通顺;2.词数:100左右,开头已经给出。TopMealoftheDayNowadaysit’scommonformanyhigh-schoolstudentstoskipbreakfast,改错:15分66.gifts—gift67.my—myself68.that—what69.were—was70.while—when71.walk—walked72.insisted后加on73.去掉for74.正确75.deep—deeply四、书面表达范文:35分TopMealoftheDayNowadaysit’scommonformanyhigh-schoolstudentstoskipbreakfast,leadingtobothpoorschoolperformanceanddamagetotheirhealth.Whenaskedwhytheyskipbreakfast,somestudentssaytheythinkofbreakfastastheleastimportantmealoftheday,andthinkitunnecessary,whileotherssaytheyhavetoolittletimeinthemorningtohavebreakfast.Andathirdgroup,mostlygirls,saytheywanttoloseweightsotheyskipbreakfast.Wesuggestthateverystudentshouldhavebreakfastproperlyeveryday,sincebreakfastcanprovidethenecessaryenergythatoneneedseveryday.Inaddition,havingbreakfastcanhelpyoutoconcentrateinclassandstudymoreefficiently.