2006年高考英语(江苏卷)书面表达讲评•据报道:2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以“DosandDon'tsforthe2008OlympicVolunteers”为题,用英语写一篇短文,讨论志愿者应该做什么,不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容:注意l.对所给要点,不要简单翻译,要有适当发挥。2.词数120左右。短文中已写好的部分,不计入词数。3.参考词汇:形象—image第一步:审题选择要点•1.据报道,2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。•2.(阐述该做与不该做的事,可分开阐述,亦可一起阐述)•①待人礼貌友好;•②坚守岗位;•③介绍中国历史和文化;•④不忘履行自己的职责;•⑤避免不得体的言行;•⑥不损害祖国的形象。•如果我成为志愿者,我还应该做什么,不应该做什么。•比如:•如果我成为志愿者,一定会努力学习,一定会遵纪守法,一定会与外国来宾交朋友,使奥运会圆满成功。第二步:搜索相关词组或句型•据报道•Itisreportedthat…•被选为……的志愿者•bechosenasvolunteersfor•2008北京奥运会•theOlympicGamesinBeijing.•应该做什么,不应该做什么•Whatshould…doandwhatshould…notdo?•对…友好•bepoliteandfriendlytosb•treateverybodypolitely•与…相处融洽、关系好•getalongwellwith•beongoodtermswith•避免•avoid(doing)sth•来自世界各地•fromallovertheworld•坚持岗位•sticktoone’sownposts•履行职责、做分内之事•doone’sbit/doone’sduty•fulfillone’sownresponsibilityofthepost•提供优质服务•offergoodservices•满足合理需求•satisfyanyreasonableneeds;•乐意做•be/getreadytodo/bewillingtodo•向…介绍…•introduce…to…/make…knowntosb•对…有危害•doharmto•有幸…•havethehonortodo•努力做•makeeveryefforttodo•遵纪守法•followthelawanddiscipline•obeythelawandregulations•与…交友•makefriendswith•尽力做•doallsbcantodo•抓住机会•taketheopportunitytodo第三步:扩展成句•Itisreportedthatabout100,000peoplewillbechosenasvolunteersforthe2008OlympicGamesinBeijing.Whatshouldthevolunteersdoandwhatshouldtheynotdo?•Theyshouldbepoliteandfriendlytotheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworld,andavoidimproperbehavior.•Theyshouldtreattheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworldinapoliteandfriendlymanner,withoutanyimproperbehavior.(不同表达法)•Theyshouldavoidanyimproperbehavior,treatingtheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworldinapoliteandfriendlymanner.(不同表达法)•Theyshouldsticktotheirposts,offeringgoodservices,satisfyinganyreasonableneedsandreadytohelpthoseindifficulty,andneverfailtodotheirduty.•Theycanoffergoodservices,satisfy/meetanyreasonableneeds,andgetreadytohelpthoseindifficulty.(不同表达法)•TheyshouldintroducetheChinesecultureandhistorytoforeignerssothattheymayknowChinabetterandneversayordoanythingthatharmstheimageofourmotherland.•TheyshouldintroducetheChinesecultureandhistorytoforeigners,insteadofsayingordoinganythingthatharmstheimageofourmotherland.(不同表达法)•IfIhavethehonourtobechosenasavolunteer,besidestheabove,Iwillworkhardandcreatively,butneverbelazy.•Iwillfollowthelawanddiscipline,butneverbreakthem.•Iwilltaketheopportunitytomakefriendswiththeathletesandvisitors,andhelpmakethe2008OlympicGamesagreatsuccess.第四步:连句成篇•加上有关过渡句及过渡词汇,连句成篇•Itisreportedthatabout100,000peoplewillbechosenasvolunteersforthe2008OlympicGamesinBeijing.Whatshouldthevolunteersdoandwhatshouldtheynotdo?•Firstly,theyshouldbepoliteandfriendlytotheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworld,andavoidimproperbehaviour.Secondly,theyshouldsticktotheirposts,offeringgoodservices,satisfyinganyreasonableneedsandbeingreadytohelpthoseindifficulty,andneverfailtodotheirduty.Thirdly,theyshouldintroducetheChinesecultureandhistorytoforeignerssothattheymayknowChinabetter,andneversayordoanythingthatharmstheimageofourmotherland.•IfIhavethehonourtobechosenasavolunteer,besidestheabove,Iwillworkhardandcreatively,butneverbelazy.Iwillfollowthelawanddiscipline,butneverbreakthem.Iwilltaketheopportunitytomakefriendswiththeathletesandvisitors,andhelpmakethe2008OlympicGamesagreatsuccess.结束