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2006年高考英语(江苏卷)书面表达讲评•据报道：2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以“DosandDon'tsforthe2008OlympicVolunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容：注意l．对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。2．词数120左右。短文中已写好的部分，不计入词数。3．参考词汇：形象—image第一步：审题选择要点•1.据报道，2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。•2.（阐述该做与不该做的事，可分开阐述，亦可一起阐述）•①待人礼貌友好；•②坚守岗位；•③介绍中国历史和文化；•④不忘履行自己的职责；•⑤避免不得体的言行；•⑥不损害祖国的形象。•如果我成为志愿者，我还应该做什么，不应该做什么。•比如:•如果我成为志愿者，一定会努力学习，一定会遵纪守法，一定会与外国来宾交朋友，使奥运会圆满成功。第二步：搜索相关词组或句型•据报道•Itisreportedthat…•被选为……的志愿者•bechosenasvolunteersfor•2008北京奥运会•theOlympicGamesinBeijing.•应该做什么，不应该做什么•Whatshould…doandwhatshould…notdo?•对…友好•bepoliteandfriendlytosb•treateverybodypolitely•与…相处融洽、关系好•getalongwellwith•beongoodtermswith•避免•avoid(doing)sth•来自世界各地•fromallovertheworld•坚持岗位•sticktoone’sownposts•履行职责、做分内之事•doone’sbit/doone’sduty•fulfillone’sownresponsibilityofthepost•提供优质服务•offergoodservices•满足合理需求•satisfyanyreasonableneeds；•乐意做•be/getreadytodo/bewillingtodo•向…介绍…•introduce…to…/make…knowntosb•对…有危害•doharmto•有幸…•havethehonortodo•努力做•makeeveryefforttodo•遵纪守法•followthelawanddiscipline•obeythelawandregulations•与…交友•makefriendswith•尽力做•doallsbcantodo•抓住机会•taketheopportunitytodo第三步：扩展成句•Itisreportedthatabout100,000peoplewillbechosenasvolunteersforthe2008OlympicGamesinBeijing.Whatshouldthevolunteersdoandwhatshouldtheynotdo?•Theyshouldbepoliteandfriendlytotheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworld,andavoidimproperbehavior.•Theyshouldtreattheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworldinapoliteandfriendlymanner,withoutanyimproperbehavior.（不同表达法）•Theyshouldavoidanyimproperbehavior,treatingtheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworldinapoliteandfriendlymanner.（不同表达法）•Theyshouldsticktotheirposts,offeringgoodservices,satisfyinganyreasonableneedsandreadytohelpthoseindifficulty,andneverfailtodotheirduty.•Theycanoffergoodservices,satisfy/meetanyreasonableneeds,andgetreadytohelpthoseindifficulty.（不同表达法）•TheyshouldintroducetheChinesecultureandhistorytoforeignerssothattheymayknowChinabetterandneversayordoanythingthatharmstheimageofourmotherland.•TheyshouldintroducetheChinesecultureandhistorytoforeigners,insteadofsayingordoinganythingthatharmstheimageofourmotherland.（不同表达法）•IfIhavethehonourtobechosenasavolunteer,besidestheabove,Iwillworkhardandcreatively,butneverbelazy.•Iwillfollowthelawanddiscipline,butneverbreakthem.•Iwilltaketheopportunitytomakefriendswiththeathletesandvisitors,andhelpmakethe2008OlympicGamesagreatsuccess.第四步：连句成篇•加上有关过渡句及过渡词汇,连句成篇•Itisreportedthatabout100,000peoplewillbechosenasvolunteersforthe2008OlympicGamesinBeijing.Whatshouldthevolunteersdoandwhatshouldtheynotdo?•Firstly,theyshouldbepoliteandfriendlytotheathletesandvisitorsfromallovertheworld,andavoidimproperbehaviour.Secondly,theyshouldsticktotheirposts,offeringgoodservices,satisfyinganyreasonableneedsandbeingreadytohelpthoseindifficulty,andneverfailtodotheirduty.Thirdly,theyshouldintroducetheChinesecultureandhistorytoforeignerssothattheymayknowChinabetter,andneversayordoanythingthatharmstheimageofourmotherland.•IfIhavethehonourtobechosenasavolunteer,besidestheabove,Iwillworkhardandcreatively,butneverbelazy.Iwillfollowthelawanddiscipline,butneverbreakthem.Iwilltaketheopportunitytomakefriendswiththeathletesandvisitors,andhelpmakethe2008OlympicGamesagreatsuccess.结束