鸟巢英语作文【篇一：初中一年级英语作文：我的一次北京之旅(mytriptobeijing)】初中一年级英语作文：我的去北京的旅行mytriptobeijingduringthemaydayholiday,iwenttobeijingwithmyparents(在五一假期间，我和我的父母去了北京).wehadagoodtripthere（我们在那里有一个很好的旅行）.onthefirstday,wewenttothegreatwall(在第一天，我们去了长城).thegreatwallisverylongandold（长城很长并且很古老）.wefeltverytired（我们感觉有些累）.weclimbedupthegreatwall（我们登上了长城）.wealsowenttothepalacemuseum（我们也去了故宫）.ithasaverylonghistory（它有悠久的历史）.onthesecondday,wewenttothesummerpalace,thebird’snestandmanyotherplaceofinterest（在第二天，我们去了颐和园，鸟巢和许多其它的名胜古迹）.ireallyenjoyedthetriptobeijing（我很享受这次去北京的旅行）.【篇二：2011届高考英语基础写作范文】广东英语基础写作范文选登*基础写作经典背诵范文(第1-2篇)1.基础写作(“”调查谁是你的偶像)“”【写作内容】上周，我们以谁是你的偶像为题，在2600名学生根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1．调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2．男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“”．父母在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4．男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5．你的偶像及理由。【写作要求】1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。onepossibleversion：lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“whoisyouridol”.thesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandtvstarsasidols,while48%oftheboysprefersportsstars.asthedatashows,“parents”rankthesecondforthegirls,buttheforthfortheboys.however,thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.asforme,thomasedisonismyidolbecausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.2.基础写作(介绍奥运中的射击项目)[写作内容]你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运[[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【基础写作范文1选登】shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.thesportfirstappearedin1896,butnonewerecontestedduringthe1904andthe1928games.thesportreturnedtotheolympicsin1932.womenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicsinshootingin1968.thesporthasgrownsteadilyfromjustthreeshootingeventsatthe1896olympicgamesto17today.【基础写作范文2选登】itwasnotuntilattheendof19thcenturythatshooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,earneditsstatusasasport.shootingbecameanolympiceventofficiallyin1896.yet,twiceinhistory(1904,1928)shootingwassuspendedattheolympics.itreturnedtothegamesin1932,andwomenwerefirstallowedtoparticipateinthecompetitionin1968.thesporthasbeengrowingsteadilyfrom1896’sthreeeventstotoday’sseventeen.【基础写作范文3赏析】shootingwasoriginallyatoolofpeople’ssurvival,whichdevelopedintoasportseventattheendofnineteenthcentury(定语从句).in1896,itbecameoneoftheolympiceventsforthefirsttime(简单句).in1904and1928olympics,itwasstopped,afterwhichitreturnedin1932(定语从句).itwasin1968thatwomenwereallowedtojoinintheshootingcompetitionforthefirsttime(强调句).fromthenon,theeventisdevelopingsteadilyandsmoothlywiththeshootingcompetitionnumberincreasingfrom3in1896olympicsto17bynow(简单句中使“用with+”复合宾语结构作为状语).【专家点评】这篇基础写作的内容看上去很多,要在规定的句数内完整地描述射击这项体育运动的发展过程,如果全部使用简单句,就无法在规定的句数内完成整体的写作。但考生经过对全部内容的合理安排,使用简单句、并列句和复合句,就可在规定的句数内把这篇文章出色完成。这样在各个句子之间,合理地使用...
