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写渡句描写换景的作文【篇一：作文中常用的过渡句】作文中常用的过渡句作文中常用句型和过渡词句子及段落的连贯性要求恰当地使用关联词，也叫过渡词。段落是否连贯主要取决于文章内容是否符合逻辑，但是段落缺乏连贯性并不仅仅是逻辑顺序问题，过度词语也起着十分重要的作用。试比较：(1)nowadaysthereisalackofunderstandingbetweenparentandchild.(2)parentscomplainthattheirchildren’sbehaviorisoftenueasonable.(3)childrencomplainthattheirparentsaretooold-fashioned.(4)whenachildhasaproblem,hewillnottellhisparents.(5)hewillgotohisfriendsinstead.(1)nowadaysthereisalackofunderstandingbetweenparentandchild.(2)parentsoftencomplainabouttheirchildren’s“ueasonable”behavior,whilechildrenusuallythinktheirparentsaretoo“old-fashioned”.(3)thenwhenachildhasaproblem,heusuallygoestohisintimatefriendsforsympathyandadvice,leavinghisparentstotallyinthedark.比较：1.增加过渡词while，一方面强化了两代人之间互不理解的对立关系，另有一方面将（2）句和（3）句浓缩成一个句子，避免了雷同句式罗列造成的平庸感。由then引出结尾句，增强连贯性。2.句（3）分词短语leaving?充当表示结果的状语，将初稿中的句（4）和（5）合并为一个句子，增加了句式变化。toleave?inthedark“意思是使?”蒙在鼓里是一个习语。作文中如能出现一两个习语，不仅能使文章有闪光的语言点，而且显得文章地道。3.初稿中complain后的that从句改成complainabout，使得语言更简练。熟练掌握一些过渡词：1.表示叙述顺序：first,?second,?,/firstly,?secondly,?lastly,?/tobeginwith,?,next?,finally?/2.补充，递进：besides,/moreover/furthermore/inaddition/whatismore/mostimportantofall/lastbutnotleast/worsestill/tomakematterworse例：thehouseistoosmallforafamilyoffour,andfurthermore/besides/what’smore/moreover/inaddition/worsestill,itisinabadlocation.3.结果，原因：since/because/for/dueto/owingto/so/therefore/consequently/thus/asaresult/asaconsequence/forthisreason/thanksto/withthehelpof4.对照，对比，转折，让步：eventhough/inspiteofthat/however/but/regardlessof?/asopposedtothis?/nevertheless/while/onthecontrary/ontheonehand?ontheotherhanditishardwork;ienjoyitthough.contrarytowhatihadoriginallythought,thetripturnedouttobefun.5.举例：forinstance/forexample/take?forexample/suchas/like/namely/thatistosay6.总结：inaword/inshort/inbrief/inconclusion/tosumup/generallyspeaking/briefly/熟练掌握一些句式：1.原因：(1)therearethreereasonsforthis.(2)thereasonsforthisareasfollows.(3)thereasonsforthisareobvious.(4)wehavegoodreasonstobelievethat?2.优点：(1)ithasthefollowingadvantages.(2)itbenefitsusquitealot.(3)itisbeneficialtous.(4)itdoesusalotofgood.例：booksarelikefriends.theycanhelpusknowtheworldbetter?.therefore,readingextensivelyisofgreatbenefittous.3.缺点：(1)ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.(2)itdoesusmuchharm.(3)itisharmfultous.例：however,everythinghastwosides.televisioncanalsobeharmfultous?.obviouslytelevisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages．livinginacityhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages．comparedwithcars，bikeshavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages．4.表示重要，必要，困难，方便，可能：(1)it’simportant(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)forsbtodosth.(2)itplaysanimportantroleinourlife.(3)wethinkitnecessaryto?例：computersarenowbeingusedeverywhere??wehavegoodreasonstosaythatcomputersareplayinganincreasingimportantroleinourlife.5.表示措施：(1)weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.(2)weshouldtryourbesttoovercomethedifficulities.(3)weshouldsolvetheproblemthatwearefacedwith.6.事实，现状：(1)wecan’tignoret...