要点与构思 ● 年近 50 ， 1975 年来校任教 Mrs. Li is nearly 50 years old. She came to our school in 1975. She has been teaching at our school since 1975. ◆Mrs. Li, who has been teaching at our school since 1975, is nearly 50 years old. ● 工作一直努力，曾多次受表扬 She works very hard. She has been praised for her hard work many times. ◆She works very hard, for which she has been praised many times. ● 知识丰富，教学有方 She has much knowledge. She is a learned teacher. She is good at teaching. She is experienced at teaching. ◆ She is a learned teacher, who is experienced at teaching. ● 上课生动有趣，深受学生欢迎 Her lessons are lively and interesting. All the students enjoy her lessons . ◆All the students enjoy her lessons, which are lively and interesting. ◆Her lessons are popular with all the students because she always has a way to make her lessons lively and interesting. ● 与学生关系融洽，但是对学生严格要求 She gets on well with us. She is very strict with us. ◆ Although she gets on well with us, she is very strict with us. ● （发挥）她非常无私，把大量时间投入到帮助学生学习功课上。正是在她的帮助下，我们取得了很大的进步。 ◆She is so unselfish that she devotes much time to helping the studennts with their lessons. ◆ It is with her help that we have made good (great / much / rapid) progress. ● 良师益友，深受大家尊敬与爱戴 Mrs. Li is not only our good teacher, but also our good friends. ◆Not only is Mrs. Li our good teacher, but our good friends. We all love and respect her. 参考范文 : Mrs. Li, who has been teaching at our school since 1975, is nearly 50 years old. She works very hard, for which she has been praised many times. She is a learned teacher, who is experienced at teaching. Her lessons are popular with all the students because she always has a way to make her lessons lively and interesting. Although she gets on well with us, she is very strict with us. She is so unselfish that she devotes much time to helping the studennts with their lessons. It is with her help that we have made rapid progress. Not only is Mrs. Li our good teacher, but our good friends. We all love and respect her.
