《志鸿全优设计》2013-2014学年高中英语 Unit4WildlifeprotectionPartⅣ目标导学 新人教版必修2

Unit 4 Wildlife protectionPart Ⅳ Writing写作指导一、佳作展示与背诵假如你叫李 华，请根 据下表内容给中国野生动物保 护协会 CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的会长写一封建议信。问题1990 年藏羚羊的数量大约 有 100 万只，现在只剩下不到 10 万只，数量急剧减少原因为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，谋取暴利，非法捕杀藏羚羊的事仍然时有发生建议① 利用本协会的影响力加大对保护藏羚羊的宣传力度② 增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金③ 建议协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊Dear President，I'm writing to give some suggestions to further protect the T ibetan antelopes.As is often reported，too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their fur.By selling the fur，the illegal hunters can make gr eat profits.As a result，the number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly from about 1,000,000 in 1990 to less than 100,000 at pr esent.Immediate measures must be take n to solve the present s ituation.First，the importance of protecting the Tibetan antelopes should be advertised through your association.Second ， would you provide more money for the preservation(protection) of the antelopes？Last but not least，I suggest that some volunteers be sent there to help protect them.These are my suggestions and I hope they could me an something for a better future of the Tibetan antelopes.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua二、思路点拨建议信属于应用文。通常向对方传达对某事物的关心和针对某事物的不足之处提出改进的建议和措施。建议信的写作格式一般由称呼、正文、结尾、落款四部分构成。正文是建议信最重要的一部分，一般由三部分构成：第一，首先阐明提出建议的原因、理由以及自己的目的、想法。这样可以让对方从实际出发，考虑你建议的合理性，为采纳你的建议打下基础。第二，分条列出建议的内容，这样比较醒目；建议要具体明白、切实可行。第三，提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。但同时也应礼貌、谦虚，不用命令性的口气。写作时一定要注意：1．符合书信的基本格式；2．语气要委婉，用词要得体；3．结构要合理，应合 理安排所写的内容，使所写文章有条理、符合逻辑；4．建议要有说服力。三、经典句式1．As is often reported，too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their fur.本句 使用了 as 引导的非限制性定语从句。2．Last but not least，I suggest that some volunteers be sent there to help protect them.本句运用了省略 should 的虚拟语气。 提示：用最精炼的语言把你当堂掌握的核心知识的精华部分和基本技能的要领部分写下来并进行识记。1