陕西省兴平市秦岭中学2014届高考英语专题复习 短文改错促中补差学案3

陕西省兴平市秦岭中学 2014 届高三英语专题复习 短文改错促中补差学案 3假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 (2013·河南十所名校第三次联考)Hi,everyone.To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise,the Committee of our community will organize the activity.All residents they are interested in farming are invited to take part the activity.Weather permitted,we’ll ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a farm.It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community.You can grow some vegetables,plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby.You will be trained and guide while farming.Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless you are willing to.Everyone is welcome to attend!******************************************************************************************************************************************************************************Three years ago,I became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient but considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best use for it.I work ed hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they were always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top student in my class,what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are.******************************************************************************************************************************************************************************Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screa ming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner,he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation,Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later,three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand,but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.***************************************************************************************