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第1页共7页编号：时间：2021年x月x日书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟页码：第1页共7页第三天：段落展开九法确定了段落中心思想,完成了段落的主题句,设计好段落的扩展句之后，需要考虑的是怎样合理、有效地安排句子，组成条理清晰、结构严谨的段落。展开段落的方法有很多，常用的有：时间顺序法、空间顺序法、列举法、举例法、对比法、定义法、因果法、分类法、综合法等。在今天和明天的课程中我们就来详细地学习。一、时间法在叙述一个故事或者一系列事件时，通常按事件发生的先后顺序排列句子。在说明文中叙述一件事应该遵循的程序或步骤时，也常用时间顺序法。看下面的例子：Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。Afterlunch,whiletheothergirlsweresunbathing,PatandIreturnedtothewater.Sooncrampsspreadfrommystomachtomylegs.Immobilizedbypainandfear,Iyelledforhelp.MyfriendthoughtIwasjoking:sosheignoredme.However,SisterTheresacametomyrescuewhenshenoticedmyplight.Shepulledmeoutofthewaterandadministeredresuscitation.Whenregainingconsciousness,IrealizedhowcloseIhadcometodeath.Myexperiencewithneardeathremindsmeeverydayhowcloseweallaretodeathinourdailylives.在这个段落里，作者用了afterlunch;while...;soon;when...等时间连接语按时间的先后顺序记叙了一件发生在午饭后的事。Therearefourseparatestagesinmakingbread.Thefirststagebeginsbymixingyeastwithwarmwater.Thismixtureisthenaddedtohalftheamountofflour.Theresultantbattermixtureisthenleftforanhour.Atthenextstagetherestoftheflourisaddedtotherisenbattermixture,alongwithsaltandoil.Themainstepinthesecondstageisathoroughkneadingofthedough,afterwhichitislefttorise.Thethirdstageinvolvesshapingthedoughintoloaves;theshapedloavesarethenputintobreadtinsandleftto‘prove’(rise).Inthefinalstagethebreadiscookedinahotoven.Thewholeprocessofbreadmakingfinisheswhenthebreadistakenfromtheovenandleft第2页共7页第1页共7页编号：时间：2021年x月x日书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟页码：第2页共7页tocoolonwireracks.这个段落采用时间顺序法描述了做面包的的过程。作者用了Thefirststagebeginsby...,Atthenextstage...,Thethirdstageinvolves...和Inthefinalstage...等连贯性词语详细地按照先后顺序介绍了四个步骤。二、空间法空间顺序指按物体的空间位置（自左至右，由近到远，由上至下，由下到上，由里到外，由外到里，由中间到两边等顺序）来展开段落。如：Theroomwasdisgusting.Bythefarwindowwasatrashcanpiledhighwithcrumpledpapers.Inthemiddleoftheroomwasagaudy,roundsizebedlitteredwithrottingfruitpeels.Thepathbetweenthebedandthedoorway,whereIwasstanding,waschokedoffbyheapsofdirtyclothesandoldnewspapers.这个段落以空间顺序法描写了一个房间。先从描述远处的窗子开始，接着是房间中央，最后到作者所站的地方，由远到近地将房间里的一切描绘了出来。GreatBritainisanislandthatliesoffthenorthwestcoastofEurope.ThenearestcountryisFrancewhichis20milesawayfromwhichGreatBritainisseparatedbytheEnglishChannel.TheislandissurroundedbytheAtlanticOceantothewest,andtheNorthSeatotheeast.ItcomprisesthemainlandofEngland,WalesandScotland.ScotlandisintheNorth,whileWalesisinthewest.Ireland,whichisalsoanisland,liesoffthewestcoastofGreatBritain.ItconsistsofNorthernIrelandandtheIrishRepublic.GreatBritaintogetherwithNorthernIrelandconstitutestheUnitedKingdom.Thus,theUnitedKingdomiscomposedoffourparts.ThelargestoftheseisEnglandwhichisdividedinto43administrativecounties.ThecapitalcityisLondonwhichissituatedinsoutheastEngland.这个段落主要是采用由外到里的空间顺序法进行描写的。先从外围描述大不列颠的地理位置，接着从内部仔细介绍它的各个组成部分——英格兰、苏格兰和威尔士的相对位置，同时描述...