文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。1.Thesayingthatpracticemakesperfectmeanthatafteryouhaveplentyofpracticeinwhatyouweredoing，youwillbeperfectinit．Ifyouwantimproveyourstudyandwork，rememberingthatthemostimportantthingishowtoputtheknowledgeyouhavelearnedintopractice．Forexample，whenlearningalanguage，thoughyoucanmakefulluseforyourtalent，practiceisnecessary．Ifyouonlylearngrammarrulesbytheheartanddon’tdoenoughexercise，it’scertainthatyoucan’tunderstandthelanguageperfectly．Butifyourealpractisealot，maybeyouwillunderstandthemmuchbetter．Inthisway，youcanapplythatyouhavelearnedbetter．2．Nowadays,thereisaincreasingnumberofpeoplejoiningintheactivitiesofvolunteering.It’swell-knownthatvolunteeringjobsaremakingcontributionstosocietywithsomethinginreturn.It’sastheSpiritofLeiFeng.However,knowingthis,therearestillmanypeoplewouldliketodevotethemselvestothistrend.Forinstance,the2008BeijingOlympicGameshadsuchmanyvolunteers.TheymakelotsofcontributionstothesuccessoftheOlympics.Moreover,wecanoftenseemanystudentsgotovisittheoldtotakewarmtothem.Eventhoughsomepeople’scareerisavolunteer.Theyarereadytohelpingothers.Althoughthevolunteersaremuchmorecommon,westillneedtothanktheyfordevotingthemselvestosociety.3．Allofusneedfriendship.Anunderstandingbetweentwofriendsmeanbothofthemhavesimilarideasandtrustingeachother.Otherwise,itisimpossibleforhimtohelpeachotherandtomaketheirfriendshiptolastlong.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Soreallyfriendshipshouldabletostandallsortsoftests.Anditiswisetohaveasmanygoodfriendsthatwecan.Themorefiendswehave,themorewecanlearnforoneanother,butthemorepleasurewecansharetogether.4Studentsneedenoughsportsandactivitiestokeepfitandrelax,andinsomeschoolsstudentsarenotgivingenoughtimetodooutdooractivities.Teachersaskstudentstospendmostoftheirtimeatstudies.Butifstudentsfeeltired,theycan’tpayattentiontothatthey’restudying.Theywillbeinabadhealth.It’salsonotgoodforhisstudies.Inmyopinions,it’simportantgivestudentsenoughtimetodooutdooractivities.Thentheywillenjoybetterhealthandworkhard.Sopleasepaymoreattentiontostudenthealthandgrowth.5．Mycarjustwouldn’tmoveanyfarther.Itwascompletedead,andIwasafewmilesawayfrommyhomeinthatcold,wetnight.IdecidedwalkaroundalittlebeforeacceptingI’dhavetospendthenightinthecar.MaybeIcanfindatelephone.Actually,Ididn’thavetowalkfarbeforeIfoundthesmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.Iknockedatthedoorandwasdelightingwhenapleasantoldmanopenedthedoorbutlistenedtomystorycarefully.Hesaidhehadnotelephoneandthatitwasn’tanywithinwalkingdistance,buttheoldmanwhoofferedtogotorepairmycar.6．Weallwanttogrowuphappilyandhealthy,andforthisgoalwemustdoseveralthings.Firstly,weshoulddevelopgoodattitudeforlife.Lifeconsistofnotonlysunshinebutalsohardtime.Weshouldbebraveinfrontofdifficulties.Secondly,wemuststudyhardbecauseofknowledgeispower.Ifwehavethepower,wecanhelptobuildyourcountryandenjoylifebetter.Inordertostudywell,weneedtodosportsothatwecankeepfitness.Wecangorunning,playingballgamesbutsimplytakeawalkafteraday’sstudy.Ifwedothosethingswell,wewillbe...
