用地道语言写地道作文1）选择词化度高的表达方式词化是指一个短语或句子在使用过程中逐渐凝固成一个词或词项，如“enjoy”一词，所表达的意义是“享受……的乐趣”。这种用一个词表达一个短语的含义的表达法叫做综合型表达法，相反，对于同一个概念，若用短语来表达则是分析性表达法。综合性表达法就是词化了的表达法。比较英汉两种语言，我们发现，汉语多分析性表达，而英语多综合性表达，这主要与英语中大量的派生词、转类词和单纯词有关。（makesb.abletodosth.）dwarf,annoy,deprive,justify（1）Thenewspapersmadehislongrecordofaccomplishmentsthemostimportantnews.改进：Thenewspapersheadlinedhislongrecordofaccomplishments.（2）TherearemanyfamousarchitectureswhichmaketheSummerPalacequietdifferentfromotherparks.改进：ManyfamousarchitecturalfeaturesdistinguishtheSummerPalace.（3）Thepresentsituationsmakeushavethereasontobeoptimistic.改进：Thepresentsituationsjustifyoptimism.（4）TVmakespeoplehavefewchancestocommunicateeachother.改进：TVdeprivespeopleofthechancetocommunicateeachother.（5）Thecampaignshave,however,mademoreandmorepeoplerealizetheimportanceoftrafficrules.改进：Thecampaignshave,however,promotedagrowingrealizationoftheimportanceoftrafficrules.（6）Thefloodcausedsome500peopletolosetheirlives.改进：Thefloodclaimedsome500lives.（7）Settingofffirecrackersmightmakepeople'slivesdangerous改进：Settingofffirecrackersmightendangerpeople'slives.InfluencedbyChineseanalyticexpression,ChinesestudentsfinditdifficulttousesyntheticexpressioninEnglish.Besides,syntheticexpressiondemandsalargevocabulary.ManyChineselearnersareveryshortofconcreteandvividverbs,they,instead,overusetheverb“make”and“be”.AnAmericanteacheroncesaid,toproducevivid,economic,andidiomaticlanguage,oneshouldtrytoavoidusing“bePattern”,usingmorepowerfulactionverbs（强有力的行为动词）。1）TheSummerpalaceisoneofthebiggestandoldestparksinChina.ItisthemostbeautifulparkinBeijingaswell.Inthepark,therearemanyfamousarchitectureswhichmakeitquietdifferentfromotherparks.ManyfamousarchitecturalfeaturesdistinguishtheSummerPalace,oneofthebiggestandoldestparksinChina,fromjustanyotherpark.2）Afteritsnaturalscenery,thedominantfeatureofNankingistheYangtzeRiverBridge.Secondonlytothenaturalscenery,theYangtzeRiverBridgedominatesNanking.3)Thereisabeautifulparknearmyhouse.ThenameoftheparkisTian-tanPark,whichwasbuiltseveralhundredyearsago.ItisthebiggestparkinBeijing.TheTian-Tanparkisfamousnotonlyforitsbeautybutitsquietnessaswell.NearmyhousestandsTian-Tan,thebiggestparkinBeijing,builtseveralhundredyearsagoandfamousnowfornotonlyitsbeautybutalsoitsquietness.4)Thereisaplacewheredreamsofparadiseremotearetransformedintoreality.ItisverymuchtherealChina,embracingallofthetraditionalChinesegoods,cultureandhistory.Theplacetransformsdreamsofaremoteparadiseintoreality.ItembracesallofthetraditionalChinesegoods,cultureandhistory.5)Nanking'sclimateismarkedbyintensedryheatduringsummermonths,theoriginofitsreputationasoneofthe“fivefurnacesoftheYangtze”.IntensedryheatinthesummerearnsNankingthereputationasoneofthe“fivefurnacesoftheYangtze.”6)Thereisariverbeforemyhouse.ItisaneasttowestriverandconnectedwiththeYangtzeRiver.Itisnotverylongbutdeep.Ariver,notverylongbutdeep,runsbeforemyhouseandconnectswiththeYangtzeRiver.7)Ontheriverbankstherearemanywillowtreeswiththeirbranchesbendingintowater.Manywillowtreesbendtheirbranchesintotheriver.8)Inthefront,itwasthesharpslopeofacliff.Thefrontcliffs...
