灵宝一高英语组刘超伟英语文章呆板单调缺少可读性耐人寻味有深度仅局限在把内容交代清楚的水准上，只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙使用一些高级词汇或句型，以凸显文章的亮点，使文章增添文采，给读者(尤其是阅卷老师留下深刻印象)把英语句子写活的方法探讨1.灵活改变句子开头“主语+谓语+宾语”，“主语+谓语”,“主语+系动词+表语”即主语位于句子开头使用倒状或以状语开头会使文章增强表现力在小山顶上有一座古庙。Therestandsanoldtempleatthetopofthehill.→Atthetopofthehilltherestandsanoldtemple.只有这样你才能把它做好。Youcandoitwellonlyinthisway.→Onlyinthiswaycanyoudoitwell.窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。Ayoungwomansatbythewindow.→Bythewindowsatayoungwoman.2.避免重复使用同一词语我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如love,enjoy,prefer,appreciate,befondof,carefor等。Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.3.合理使用省略句他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?Hemaybebusy.Ifhe’sbusy,I’llcalllater.Ifheisnotbusy,canIseehimnow?→Hemaybebusy.Ifso,I’llcalllater.Ifnot,canIseehimnow?如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了。Iftheweatherisfine,we’llgo.Ifitisnotfine,we’llnotgo.→Iftheweatherisfine,we’llgo.Ifnot,not.她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。Shecouldhaveappliedforthatjob,butshedidn’tdoso.→Shecouldhaveappliedforthatjob,butshedidn’t.4.适当运用非谓语结构非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。Whentheyheardthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.→Hearingthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。AsIdidn’tknowheraddress,Iwasn’tabletogetintouchwithher.→Notknowingheraddress,Iwasn’tabletogetintouchwithher.他出生农民家庭，只上过两年学。Ashewasbornintoapeasantfamily,hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling.→Bornintoapeasantfamily,hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling.5.结合使用长句与短句交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱歌，跳舞，还讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Thenwehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.Wehadagoodtime.→Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinging,dancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.Allinall,weenjoyedourselvesverymuch.6.适当使用短语代替单词他已决定长大了当老师。Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.→Hehasmadeuphismindtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.他不大喜欢音乐。Hedoesn'tlikemusic.→Hedoesn'tcaremuchformusic.他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。Hetoldmethatthequestionwasnowbeingdiscussed.→Hetoldmethatthequestionwasnowunderdiscussion.7.恰当套用某些固定表达他太累了，不能再往前走了。Hewasverytired.Hecouldn’twalkanyfarther.→Hewastootiredtowalkanyfarther.这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。Thefilmwasveryinteresting.Boththeteachersandthestudentslikedit.→Thefilmwassointerestingthatboththeteachersandthestudentslikedit.你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。Yoursonisold.Hecanlookafterhimselfnow.→Yoursonisoldenoughtolookafterhimselfnow.8.尽量使句子带点“洋味”别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。Don'tworry.Beboldandtryit,andyou'lllearnitsoon.→Don'tworry.Justgoforit,andyou'llgetitsoon.谢谢你陪我玩。Thankyouforplayingwithme.→Than...
