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Students’worksheet湖南省浏阳市第一中学英语组冯玉荣HowtoimproveachartwritingExample：假如你是李华，最近你学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中一两个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出，词数120左右After-schoolactivitiesinourschoolRecently,Ihavedoneasurveyaboutthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsinmyschoolspendondifferentafter-schoolactivities.Task1:Revision：fillintheblanksThechart/graphaboveshows/describesthat…Fromthechart/graphwecanthat…canbeseenfromthechart/graphthat...(正如)isshown/describedinthechart/graph,…(根据）thechart/graph,…Task2:Translatethefollowingsentences.1.我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。Thestudentsinourschool.2.看电视占用了72分钟。WatchingTV.3.24分钟花在了电脑上。24minutes.4.学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。Thestudentsspendtheirsparetimethecomputer.5.锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5%。Doingsports.Task3:pairwork:Proofreading------Afirst-timewriting1每天所用时间（分钟）Chart1:学生主要课余活动及所用时间Chart2:学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例FromChart1,wecanlearnthatthestudentsspend96minutesindoinghomework.WatchTVtakesup72minutes.①Theyspend36minuteslistentomusic.24minutesarespentonthecomputer.②Theyonlyspend12minutesonsports.WhichisshowninChart2,③thestudentsonlyspend5%theirsparetimeonsportsandtheyspend30percentageoftheirsparetimeonTV.④IthinktheyspendtoomuchtimeonTVandtoofewtimeonsports.That’snotgoodforourhealthy.⑤Ithinkthestudentsshoulddomoresportsintheirfreetimetobuilduptheirbody.Task4:Modification----Rewriting①Theyspend36minuteslisteningtomusic.24minutesisspentonthecomputer.Tip:用连词把两个简单句转换成并列句。Theyspend36minuteslisteningtomusic24minutesisspentonthecomputer.②Theyonlyspend12minutesonsports.Tip:句首用连接词，意思为“但是，然而”;用“Ittakessb.+一段时间+todo...”句型改写句子。,it.③...thestudentsonlyspend5%oftheirsparetimeonsportsandtheyspend30percentoftheirsparetimeonTV.Tip:使用连接词，意思为“然而”强调对比;避免重复使用spare...thestudentsonlyspend5%oftheirsparetimeonsports(然而，强调对比）theyspend30percent(ofthetime)onTV.④IthinktheyspendtoomuchtimeonTVandtoolittletimeonsports.That’snotgoodfortheirhealth.Tip:很明显在课余时间很多学生更愿意看电视而不愿意做运动，这不利于健康;定语从句(很明显）thatmanystudentswatchTVdosportsafterschool,isnotgoodfortheirhealth.（定语从句）⑤Ithinkthestudentsshoulddomoresportsintheirfreetimetobuilduptheirbodies.Tip:句首加连接词表“因此”；Ithink用其他表达；学生应充分利用课余时间做运动来锻炼身体。(连接词表“因此”），,（Ithink用其他表达）thestudentsshould(充分利用课余时间）todomoresportstobuilduptheirbodiesTask5：Learntowrite下面两幅图表反映的是最近调查你校学生的有关信息：2学生组成结构图91%8%1%本地居民子女外来务工人员子女外籍人员子女0102030405060大学职业学院出国留学就业在校学生结构图中学毕业生去向示意图写作要求请根据以上两个图表介绍你校在校学生结构情况和中学毕业生去向调查情况，并谈谈你自己的毕业意向及理由。（讲话的开头和结尾已为你写好）。参考词汇：职业学院：vocationalcollege外来务工人员：migrantworkersLadiesandgentlemen,I’mLiHua.Today,I’mhonoredtosharewithyouthesurveyinourschool.That’sall.Thankyou.Expressions&sentencepatternsforreference百分比：…percentof.../分数（onethirdof,threefifthsof,onequarterof)/themajorityofthestudents…3学生人数百分比…takeup/occupy/accountfor…percent(占百分之…)选择：choosetodo…/plantodo…/inten...