HowtoimproveachartwritingWriting湖南省浏阳市第一中学英语组冯玉荣Whatactivitiesdoyouusuallyhaveafterschool?每天所用时间（分钟）假如你是李华，最近你学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中一两个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出，词数120左右Chart1:学生主要课余活动及所用时间Chart2:学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例After-schoolactivitiesinourschoolRecently,Ihavedoneasurveyaboutthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsinmyschoolspendondifferentafter-schoolactivities..12243672960102030405060708090100体育锻炼用电脑听音乐看电视做作业做作业,40%体育锻炼5%用电脑10%听音乐15%看电视30%12243672960102030405060708090100体育锻炼用电脑听音乐看电视做作业做作业,40%体育锻炼5%用电脑10%听音乐15%看电视30%每天所用时间（分钟）学生主要课余活动及所用时间Thechart/graphaboveshows/describesthat…Fromthechart/graphwecanthat…canbeseenfromthechart/graphthat...isshown/describedinthechart/graph,…(根据）thechart/graph,…findout/learn/seeItAccordingtoAs学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例Translatethefollowingsentences.1.我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。2.看电视占用了72分钟。3.24分钟花在了电脑上。4.学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。5.锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5%。1.我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。2看电视占用了72分钟。3.24分钟花在了电脑上。4.学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。5.锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5%。Thestudentsinourschool.WatchingTV.Thestudentsspendtheirsparetimethecomputer.Translatethefollowingsentences.Doingsports.spend96minuteseverydayindoinghomework/onhomeworktakesup/occupies72minutesontakesup/occupiesonly5%ofthesparetime.10percentof/onetenthof/10%of24minutes.isspentonthecomputerChart2:学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例inmyopinion,…tomymind,…Frommypointofview,…Iholdtheview/opinionthat…AsfarasIamconcerned,…Personally,Ithink……做作业,40%体育锻炼5%用电脑10%听音乐15%看电视30%FromChart1,wecanlearnthatthestudentsspend96minutesindoinghomework.WatchTVtakesup72minutes.Theyspend36minuteslistentomusic.24minutesarespentonthecomputer.Theyonlyspend12minutesonsports.WhichisshowninChart2,thestudentsonlyspend5%theirsparetimeonsportsandtheyspend30percentageoftheirsparetimeonTV.IthinktheyspendtoomuchtimeonTVandtoofewtimeonsports.That’snotgoodforourhealthy.Ithinkthestudentsshoulddomoresportsintheirfreetimetobuilduptheirbody.FromChart1,wecanlearnthatthestudentsspend96minutesindoinghomework.WatchTVtakesup72minutes.Theyspend36minuteslistentomusic.24minutesarespentonthecomputer.Theyonlyspend12minutesonsports.WatchinglisteningisWhichisshowninChart2,thestudentsonlyspend5%theirsparetimeonsportsandtheyspend30percentageoftheirsparetimeonTV.IthinktheyspendtoomuchtimeonTVandtoofewtimeonsports.That’snotgoodforourhealthy.Ithinkthestudentsshoulddomoresportsintheirfreetimetobuilduptheirbody.ofpercenthealththeirbodieslittleAsFromChart1,wecanlearnthatthestudentsspend96minutesindoinghomework.WatchingTVtakesup72minutes.Theyspend36minuteslisteningtomusic.24minutesisspentonthecomputer.Theyonlyspend12minutesonsports.AsisshowninChart2,thestudentsonlyspend5%oftheirsparetimeonsportsandtheyspend30percentoftheirsparetimeonTV.IthinktheyspendtoomuchtimeonTVandtoolittletimeonsports.That’snotgoodfortheirhealth.Ithinkthestudentsshoulddomoresportsintheirfreetimetobuilduptheirbodies.Isitagoodwriting?①Theyspend36minuteslisteningtomusic.24minutesisspentonthecomputer.②Theyonlyspend...
