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PolitenessinWritingApril26thWhilewatchingthevideo,please:payattentiontothetonesofMrs.PatmoreandLadyEdithwhentheyspeaktoDaisy.think:ifyouwerethegirlDaisyinthevideo,whowouldyouprefertotalkto,LadyEdithorMrs.Patmore?Why?VideoclipsfromDowntonAbbeyThewayyouspeak,oryourtonewillmakeagreatdifferencetoyourcommunicationeffects.VideoclipsfromDowntonAbbey(2016年全国卷I书面表达）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教MsJenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。Questions:HowwouldyoufeelifyouwereMs.Jenkins?WouldyoubeverygladtohelpLiHua?Task:Pleaseidentifytheinappropriatesentencesintheletter.Task1DearMs.Jenkins,Asapopularsayinggoes,nopains,nogains.Consequently,Iwouldliketosearchforapart-timejob.Ihavealreadywrittentheapplicationandthepersonalresume.I’dreallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmewithcheckingthewordsandformatofmyresume.Asyoucansee,ithasalotofmistakesandtherearethreeimportantpoints.Foronething,you’dbettercheckwhethertheresumeisperfect.Foranother,Isuggestthatyoushouldhelpmedosometranslation.What’smore,it’shightimethatyoushouldtakeimmediatemeasurestosolvethetroubleintheexpressionandwords.Asaresult,itisessentialthatyoushouldtakeimmediatemeasurestosolvethetrouble.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHuaTask:pleaseidentifytheimpolitesentences.Thewriterusesmanypoliteformsintheletter.Underlinetheexamplesofthepoliteforms.Task2ReadtheletterandfindthepoliteformsEXAMPLES:Ihopeyouwillnotmindmewritingtoask…Iwonderif…Itwouldbehandytohave…DearMsSanders,IreadinthenewspapertodaythatyouaretobethearchitectforthenewBankstowncinema.Ihopeyouwillnotmindmewritingtoaskifyouhavethoughtabouttheneedsofdisabledcustomers.InparticularIwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowingthings:1Adequateaccessforwheelchairs.Itwouldbehandytohaveliftstoallpartsofthecinema.Thebuttonsintheliftsshouldbeeasyforapersoninawheelchairtoreach,andthedoorsbewideenoughtoenter.Insomecinemas,theliftsareatthebackofthecinemaincold,unattractiveplaces.Asdisabledpeoplehavetousethelifts,thismakesthemfeeltheyarenotasimportantasothercustomers.Aletterofmakingsuggestions2Earphonesforpeoplewhohavetroublehearing.Itwouldhelptofitsetsofearphonestoallseats,notjusttosomeofthem.Thiswouldallowhearing-impairedcustomerstoenjoythecompanyoftheirhearingfriendsratherthanhavingtositinaspecialarea.3Raisedseating.Peoplewhoareshortcannotalwaysseethescreen.SoI'dliketosuggestthattheseatsatthebackbeplacedhigherthanthoseatthefrontsothateveryonecanseethescreeneasily.Perhapstherecouldbeaspaceattheendofeachrowforpeopleinwheelchairstositnexttotheirfriends.Aletterofmakingsuggestions4Toilets.Fordisabledcustomersitwouldbemoreconvenienttoplacethetoiletsneartheentrancetothecinema.Itcanbedifficultiftheonlydisabledtoiletisinthebasementalongwayfromwherethefilmisshowing.Andifthedoorscouldbeopenedoutwards,disabledcustomerswouldbeveryhappy.5Carparking.Ofcourse,thereareusuallyspacesspeciallyreservedfordisabledandelderlydrivers.Iftheyareclosetothecinemaentranceand/orexit,itiseasierfordisabledpeopletogettofilmincomfort.AletterofmakingsuggestionsThankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopemysuggestionswillmeetwithyourapproval.Disabledpeopleshouldhavethesameopportunitiesasable-bodiedpeopletoenjoythecinemaandtodosowithdignity.Iamsuremanypeoplewillpraiseyourcinemaifyoudesignitwithgoodaccessfordisabledpeople.Itwillalsoma...