试题习题、尽在百度仔细审题、认真作答专题限时集训(二十八)短文改错(Ⅲ)(对应学生用书第143页)A【导学号：52384091】(2017·福建省质量检查)ZhouYanistheSeniorThreestudent.Lastweek，hegoestoseeadoctorbecauseofhisarmsandfingershurt.Thedoctortoldhimthefactthathada“mobilephonedisease”．Zhousentmessagesforhisfriendswithhismobilephoneallthetime，eveninbed.Zhoustartedtodobadlyinalltheexambecausehespentsomanytimeonhismobilephone.Hedidn'tstopusethemobilephoneuntilhisarmshurt.YangLing，whichisanexpertfromahealthcenter，saidstudentsshouldtrytousetheirmobilephonesless，especialatschool.【答案】ZhouYanistheaSeniorThreestudent.Lastweek，hegoeswenttoseeadoctorbecause﹨ofhisarmsandfingershurt.Thedoctortoldhimthefactthat∧hehada“mobilephonedisease”．Zhousentmessagesfortohisfriendswithhismobilephoneallthetime，eveninbed.Zhoustartedtodobadlyinalltheexamexamsbecausehespentsomanymuchtimeonhismobilephone.Hedidn'tstopuseusingthemobilephoneuntilhisarmshurt.YangLing，whichwhoisanexpertfromahealthcenter，saidstudentsshouldtrytousetheirmobilephonesless，especialespeciallyatschool.第一处：the→a.考查冠词.student是可数名词，且第一次在语境中出现，表泛指，故用不定冠词修饰.第二处：goes→went.考查动词时态.与语境Lastweek呼应，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时.第三处：删除of.hisarmsandfingershurt是个句子，故of多余.第四处：had前加he.考查代词.that引导一个同位语从句，而非定语从句，在从句中不作句子成分，对fact的内容进行补充说明，由此可知，从句中缺少了主语，试题习题、尽在百度仔细审题、认真作答且由上文的him可知，应用人称代词的主格形式he.第五处：for→to.考查介词.固定搭配sendsth.tosb.意为“给某人送某物”，符合语境，故用介词to.第六处：exam→exams.考查名词复数.exam是可数名词，且被all修饰，故用复数形式.第七处：many→much.time在此处用作不可数名词，故用much修饰.第八处：use→using.考查动名词.固定搭配stopdoingsth.意为“停止做某事”，符合语境，故用动名词作宾语.第九处：which→who.考查定语从句.先行词YangLing，指人，故用who引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语.第十处：especial→especially.考查副词.应用副词especially修饰介词短语atschool.B(2017·武汉市武昌调研考试)Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutcompass.Ifthereisnoaiminourlives，wewillgetlose.Lastterm，Icouldn'tacceptthetruthwhichIfailedinmymathexamination.Idecidedtogiveitup，soIskippedfromclassesfrequently.Consideredmycase，myteacherofferedmeseveraldetailedapproachandadvisedmetosetashort-termgoaltoimprovemymath.Finally，Iworkharderthaneverandmadegreatprogressinhermath.Inmyopinion，successliesinaseriesofgoals.However，weshouldremembertomakeourtargetsclearlyandsparenoefforttorealizeourdreams.【答案】Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithout∧acompass.Ifthereisnoaiminourlives，wewillgetloselost.Lastterm，Icouldn'tacceptthetruthwhichthatIfailedinmymathexamination.Idecidedtogiveitup，soIskipped﹨fromclassesfrequently.ConsideredConsideringmycase，myteacherofferedmeseveraldetailedapproachapproachesandadvisedmetosetashort-termgoaltoimprovemymath.Finally，Iworkworkedharderthaneverandmadegreatprogressinhermymath.Inmyopinion，successliesinaseries试题习题、尽在百度仔细审题、认真作答ofgoals.HoweverTherefore，weshouldremembertomakeourtargetsclearlyclearandsparenoefforttorealizeourdreams.第一处：compass前加a.考查冠词.compass为可数名词，表示泛指，要用不定冠词.第二处：lose→lost.考查形容词.此处的get为系动词，故其后应用形容词.第三处：which→that.考查名词性从句.名词truth后为同位语从句，从句中不缺...
