让作文灵动的办法•一、使用适当的连词和连词短语及过渡语•二、改变传统语序•三、使用不同的从句和句型•四、使用非谓语动词•五、运用开放思维加定语AnUnforgettableExperience1.今年暑假，我和家人去了大连2.早餐后，我们乘巴士去了海洋公园。那里有很多鱼，还有海豚表演，午餐在饭店吃了海鲜3.午餐后去游泳，海水蓝，沙滩金黄，我们玩得很开心，最后我们回到了旅馆。4.我们还去了大连一些别的地方5.我们过了一个美好的假期习作•AnUnforgettableExperience•IwenttoDalianwithmyfamilythissummerholiday.Wegottherebyair.•Afterbreakfastinthemorning，webegantostartourtravel.FirstwetookthebustotheSeaPark.Therearemanydifferentkindsoffishes.Andtherewastheshowofdolphins.Thenwehadseafoodforlunchinarestaurant.•Afterlunchwewentswimming.Theseawasblueandbeachwasgolden.Weallenjoyedourselvesinthesea.Finallywewentbackthehotel,Wehadahappyday.•Inthistrip，wealsowenttosomeplacesinDalian•wehadagoodholiday.修改后作文Thissummerholiday，togetherwithmyfamily,IwentbyairtoDalian,whichisaverybeautifulandmoderncity.Inthemorning，havinghadthebreakfast，webegantostartourtravel.FirstwetookthebustotheSeaPark.WheretherearesomanydifferentkindsoffishesthatIcouldn'tbelievemyeyes.What’smore,Wealsosawtheshowofdolphins.Thenwehadlunchinarestaurant,enjoyingtheseafoodwhichwasverydeliciousandfamousinChina.Thegreatestthing,Ithink，istheswinningafterthelunch.Sobluewastheseaandsogoldenwasthebeachthatweallenjoyedourselvessomuch.Bysunset,wewentbacktothehotelwherewelived,tiredbuthappily.Duringthetrip，wealsowenttosomeplaceswhichwereinterestingandfamousinDalian,andagain,wehadalotoffun.whatawonderfulholiday!Thankyou
