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好句:1.Hewenttohisneighbour’shouseasfastashecould.(郭诗琪)2.Hephoned“119”asfastashecould.(梁雁仙)3.Theneighbourandthefire-fighterswereverythankfultoJack.(恩裕)4.Jackfeltreallyhappybecausehecouldhelpedotherswhoneedshelp.(煜华)5.ThoughJackandhisneighbourwereverytired,theydidn’tgiveupputtingoutthefireanddideverythingtheycouldtohelpthefirefighters.(婉颖)6.(Withoutthinkinganything),herushedtothetelephoneatonceandcalled“119”forhelp.(梓宇)7.Henearlyjumpedoutofhisskin.(国华/笑华)8.WhatabraveboyJackis!(霍俊杰)改正错误:host—ownerstrongfire1.Thefirefighterssaid“whatahelpfulboyJackis!”2.Jackcalledthefirefighterbyphoneatonce3.Whenthefirefighterarrivedthehousewhichwasonfire,thefirehasbeenputout.afterthis,thehost……4.Heranandcallforhelptothefirefighterswithphone.5.Itwasalotofthickfirecomingoutofthehouse…..6.Hegotupatonceandphonecallthefirefightertocallforhelp.7.Jack’sneighbourwasthankshealot.8.Hisneighboursaythankyoutohim.9.Jackwasatoncephonethefirefightertoaskforhelp.10.Thefirefighterweresaidtohim“Howkindofyou”11.“Howgoodaboy!”12.“Whatabravepeople!”13.Thefirewasburningseriously14.Intheend,thefirewasputout.BensaidtoJack“Thankyouforhelpmealot”thefirefightersaid“youaresuchacleverboy!”ButJackthought“Notsaythanks,whatanunforgettabledayitis!”

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