专项提能计划——书面表达(六)图画类黄金答题模板第一段:描述图画Asisvividlyshowninthepictureabove,图画的内容.Thepicturetellsusthat这幅图画大致反映的意思.第二段:解释、说明和分析图画Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously.First/Tobeginwith,揭示涵义/原因/结果1.Second/What’smore,揭示涵义/原因/结果2.Lastbutnotleast/Finally,揭示涵义/原因/结果3(如果有的话).Andthesocialproblem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)hasarisenthegreatconcern/careofourwholesociety/world/allthepeople.第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。Inmyview/pointofview/Asforme,weshouldtakesomemeasuresasfollowstodealwiththeproblemshowninthepicture.First,weshould具体的措施1.Andthenwehaveto/must具体的措施2.Onlyinthesewayscanwesolvetheproblemof具体的问题.技法尝试应用热点命题(2012·南京模拟)以下两幅图是关于学生零花钱的问题。请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的理解。短文必须包括以下内容:1.图画反映了什么。2.你对其原因的分析。3.你的建议。注意:1.必须包括所有要点,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2.词数150左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。3.文中不得提及你所在学校与本人姓名。Withthedevelopmentofourmodernsociety,childrenhavemoreandmorepocketmoney,whichisofpublicconcern.__________________________________________________________________构思谋篇1.首先要读懂所给图所要说明的内容:孩子零花钱多了所带来的问题。2.每周给多少零花钱?花钱做什么?这两个问题是文章的中心。3.给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。牛刀小试Withthedevelopmentofourmodernsociety,①childrenhavemoreandmorepocketmoney,whichisofpublicconcern.Asisseenfromthepicture,②nearlytwentysixpercentofthestudentstake50~100yuanormorefromtheirparentseveryweekwhile③fortypercentgetlessthan10yuan.Although④fourintenparentsrefusetogivethemoneywhenthinkingit’snotreasonable,abouthalfofthemseldom⑤refusetheirchildren’srequestandoneintencarelittleabouthowthemoneyisspent.Therefore,somestudentswithalargeamountofpocketmoney⑥maynotknowhowtouseitappropriately.Justasthepictureshows,⑦toshowoffhowrichheis,onestudenttreatshisclassmatestodinner,askingthemtoorderwhatevertheylike.Ithink⑧themainreasonforthisisthatchildrenaren’ttaughttheskillstomanagemoney.SoIhavesomesuggestionstomake.First,⑨parentsshouldhelpkidslearnmoney-managementskillssuchasspendingwithaplan.Besides,⑩Moreopportunitiesshouldbeofferedtokids,helpingthemknowearningmoneyishardwork.Onlyinthiswaywillkidstreasurethemoney.