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好句：1．Hewenttohisneighbour’shouseasfastashecould.(郭诗琪)2．Hephoned“119”asfastashecould.(梁雁仙)3．Theneighbourandthefire-fighterswereverythankfultoJack.(恩裕)4．Jackfeltreallyhappybecausehecouldhelpedotherswhoneedshelp.(煜华)5．ThoughJackandhisneighbourwereverytired,theydidn’tgiveupputtingoutthefireanddideverythingtheycouldtohelpthefirefighters.(婉颖)6．（Withoutthinkinganything）,herushedtothetelephoneatonceandcalled“119”forhelp.(梓宇)7．Henearlyjumpedoutofhisskin.(国华/笑华)8．WhatabraveboyJackis!(霍俊杰)改正错误：host—ownerstrongfire1．Thefirefighterssaid“whatahelpfulboyJackis!”2．Jackcalledthefirefighterbyphoneatonce3．Whenthefirefighterarrivedthehousewhichwasonfire,thefirehasbeenputout.afterthis,thehost……4．Heranandcallforhelptothefirefighterswithphone.5．Itwasalotofthickfirecomingoutofthehouse…..6．Hegotupatonceandphonecallthefirefightertocallforhelp.7．Jack’sneighbourwasthankshealot.8．Hisneighboursaythankyoutohim.9．Jackwasatoncephonethefirefightertoaskforhelp.10．Thefirefighterweresaidtohim“Howkindofyou”11．“Howgoodaboy!”12．“Whatabravepeople!”13．Thefirewasburningseriously14．Intheend,thefirewasputout.BensaidtoJack“Thankyouforhelpmealot”thefirefightersaid“youaresuchacleverboy!”ButJackthought“Notsaythanks,whatanunforgettabledayitis!”