书面表达（三）----Aletterofgivingadvice写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.基本框架：开头（beginning）----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.)4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.B.表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.写作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(问题)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建议内容).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytoDiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour____(祝愿).Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：Dear_____(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(问题).Firstandforthemost_______(建议一);inaddition_____(建议二);what’smore_____(建议三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing三个步骤Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster,I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschool’sdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.•注意衔接词使用:•表先后次序：•First,second,third….Finally•Firstly,secondly，…eventually•tobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast•递进关系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题
