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WritinWritinggpersonalpersonaltraitstraitsheavycalmfunnysmartthin…longoutgoingathleticwildquietbeautifulkindcuteWhatdoyouthinkofMissYang?Sheis….Shehas…haireyesheightbuildShehaslongcurlyhair.Shehasbigblackeyes.Sheistallandofmediumbuild.prettybeautifulSheisgoodatrunning.athleticSheisgoodatplayingping-pong.begoodatMissYangisprettyandathletic.MissYangisprettyandathletic.Shehaslongstraighthairandbigblackeyes.Sheistallandthin.Sheisgoodatplayingping-pong.Also,sheisgoodatrunning.topicsentence(主题句)details(细节)Allthedetailsshould_________thetopicsentence.agreewithagreewith((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）Topicsentence(主题句）?Practice1Practice1Maryislovely.lovelyA.Shehasbigbrighteyes.B.Shelikestomakefriendswithothers.C.Shehaslongstraighthair.D.Sheistallandthin.Allthedetailsshould__________thetopicsentence.((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）agreewithagreewithMaryislovely.Shehasbigbrighteyes.Shehaslongstraighthair.Sheistallandthin.A.Sheenjoystellingjokes.B.Shealwayshelpsherclassmatesstudy.C.Shecaresabout(关心)herfriendsalot.D.Sheenjoysgoingtoparties.E.Sheisfriendlytoothers.F.Sheoftenmakesotherslaugh.Practice2Practice2Maryiskind.kindAllthedetailsshould__________thetopicsentence.((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）agreewithagreewithMaryiskind.Shealwayshelpsherclassmatesstudy.Shecaresabout(关心)herfriendsalot.Sheisfriendlytoothers.Maryiskind.Shealwayshelpsherclassmatesstudy.Shecaresabout(关心)herfriendsalot.Sheisfriendlytoothers.Maryislovely.Shehasbigbrighteyes.Shehaslongstraighthair.Sheistallandthin.lovelykindMaryisand.Allthedetailsshouldagreewiththe______________.((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）topicsentencetopicsentencePractice3Practice3Tinaishelpfulandhard-working.helpfulhard-workinghelpfulhelp+ful帮助人adj.=hard-workinghard+workingadj.Practice3Practice3Tinaishelpfulandhard-working.helpfulhard-workingSheisfriendlytoherclassmatesandoftenhelpsthemstudy.Intheclass,shealwayslistenstotheteachercarefully.Afterschool,shespendsmuchtimedoinghomework.Shestudieslateeveryday.Everyday,shegetsupearlyandrunsfor30minutes.Thenshegoestoschool.Sheneverstopstalking.Shelikestellingjokesandoftenmakesherclassmateslaugh.Sotheclassmatesalllikeherverymuch.doKungFudoKungFufastfastbestbestneverstopeatingneverstopeatingsleepalotsleepalotPractice4Practice4Tomisathleticbutalittlelazy.1___________________2___________________3______________________________________Writedownsomedetails.Writedownsomedetails.…Allthedetailsshouldagreewiththetopicsentence.((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）Details（细节）Details（细节）1.________________.2.________________.3.________________.4.________________.Discuss(讨论)withyourpartner.Practice5Practice5Cindyislovelyandoutgoing.Allthedetailsshould__________thetopicsentence.((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）agreewithagreewithWritedownsomedetails.lovelyoutgoing…Learntowrite!Allthedetailsshould__________thetopicsentence.((细节应该围绕主题句）细节应该围绕主题句）agreewithagreewithUsesomegoodphrasesandsentences.1.Trytowriteapassageaboutyourfriendbyusingthewords“lovely,pretty,kind,helpful,hard-working”.2.Shareyourarticleswithyourclassmates.