第一讲:句子的写作2
案例分析例题:你班进行了一次综合实践活动
通过活动,同学们收获很大,尤其是李华同学进步最快
请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文
词数80个左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数
过去的表现现在的表现经常与别人吵架与别人相处融洽乱扔垃圾爱护环境沉溺于电脑游戏积极参加各种活动参考作文对比,注意划线部分
三类一般作文一类优秀作文WeareverygladthatLihuahasmadegreatprogress
Beforetheactivity,heoftenquarreledwithotherstudents,andneversaidsorrytoothers
Healwaysthrewtrashintheclassroom
Sometimes,heplayedcomputergamesforaverylongtime
Butnow,hecanmakegoodfriendswithothers
Also,heisveryactiveintakingpartinalotofactivities,suchasplayingbasketball,visitingthemuseums,goswimming…
Wealllikehimverymuch
WeareverygladthatLiHuahasmadegreatprogress
Butheusedtobeimpoliteandevenoftenquarreledwithothers
Hethrewlitteraboutandmadeourclassroomdirty
Afterclass,heusuallylosthimselfinplayingcomputergames
Afterthisactivity,LiHuahaschangedalot
Hegetsonwellwithothersandisr