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中考英语作文范例：我们的住宅小区 Ou r Hou sing Estate 我们的小区 There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our housing Rainbow Estate, is one of them. 浦东新区有很多漂亮的小区，我们的小区——彩虹小区，是其中之一。 You can see three in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2. In the gardon there is a . There is a shop on the right of Block 1. A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. 小区中间有三条街道。在第二条街道前面是一个美丽的花园，花园里有个喷泉。在第一条街道的右面是一个商店，而第三街道的左边是一个巨大的运动场，可以看到男男女女在那边做运动。 There is a small in our housing estate. It is and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate. 在我们的小区有一个小小的幼儿园。对于我们来说，住在小区十分方便和舒服。 点评：文章的结构与布局较合理，有一定的顺序，层次分明。 中考英语作文范例：我们的语音室 编辑点评：中考英语作文的另一种类型是说明文。说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。 说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的，可以自上而下，自左而右，从里到外，从整体到局部等等。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。 常用的句型如： There be... I have got a/ an... It is red/ green/ colour/ round... I like... best. It looks like... I like it very much. I will keep it forever. Our Language Lab 我们的语音室 There is a language in our school. It's on the third floor. It's big and clean. 我们学校有一个语音室，它位于三楼，大而整洁。 There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a in it. There are 50 s on the desk. 语音室里有50张桌椅，50台电脑和一个操纵台，桌子上还放着50副耳机。 Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch , TV, video and listen to tapes. Then th...