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新高考读后续写高分素材--微技能之细节描写读后续写微技能之细节描写 1高考中续写的文体主要为记叙文.顾名思义,记叙文主要以记叙事件为主,因此需要用到许多的细节描写 以使文章生动,言之有物.不少学生语言功底不错,但是续写始终得不了高分,其中一个原因可能就是细 节描写的缺乏.那么,续写该如何写呢？我们应该做到兼顾概括描述和细节描述,而且要多用细节描述.所谓概括描述是 指对一个事件的总体描述,而细节描述那么是对事件的具体描述,来对之前的总体描述进一步解释说明,这 样能够使得描述更加生动,有画面感.举例：如表达一个人的疲累时,可用概括描述：she felt exhausted,同时辅以细节描述 She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.如果大家注意这些细节的描述,一定会为你的记叙文续写增色！“感到害怕〞的细节描述当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我感到很害怕.1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚.2、请你在此概括描述的根底上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理.1)_________________________________________2)3)参考答案：1 .At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very scared.2 . 1)At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.(嗓子发紧, 膝盖发软)2)At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(P 下呆了,不敢动弹)3)At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.(被深深 地恐惧感所限制,手心出汗)表感到兴奋 thrilled当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了.1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚.2、请你在此概括描述的根底上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理.1)_________________________________________2)3)参考答案：1) When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.2) 1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(冲动得两眼放光)3) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.(冲动得心砰砰跳)4) When the host announced that she...