无BEC中级写作电子讲义第三讲商务便函与便条审题:MrSmith,yourboss,toldyoutoaskMsLiutoattendasalespresentationonanewproduct.WriteanotetoMsLiu:*sayingwhowantshertoattendthesalespresentation;*informingherwhenandwherethesalespresentationwillbeheld有同学写成MrSmithtoldmetoaskwhowantstoattend有同学写成PleasewriteanotetoMsLiuaskinghertoattendasalespresentation.一定要把题目看清楚,再下笔写。(一)商务便函一般公司企业往往都印有按照自己公司风格的商业便函,请看下列例子:MemoTo:(收信人)From:(发信人)Date:(日期)Subject:(事由)Message:(正文)大企业往往拥有许多分支机构,其商务便函信笺就包含较多的内容,如:MemoTo:(收信人)Company:(分公司)Dept:(部门)Location&Ext:(地址与分机号)Subject:From:Company:DeptLocation&Ext:Date:Message:商务便函一般由以下几个部分组成:1、Memo:Memo是Memorandum缩写,因此也可以用Memorandum,此外还有InternalMemorandum和InterofficeMemorandum,其意思都是一样的。无2、To:这一标题后面应写收信人的姓名与职衔,姓名前可以用尊称或不用,如:To:Mr.JohnSmith,SalesManager3、From:这一标题后应写发信人的姓名与职衔:职衔可根据需要决定写或不写,但姓名前不要用尊称。4、Date:日期的写法同书信里日期写法的要求完全一样,不要用数字来表示月份。5、Subject:这一标题后是写事由的,即用一个或几个词汇简单概括便函的内容,以便查阅。事由必须简洁明了,不要用完整的句子,如:ChangesinTravelAdvanceFormPromotionofStaffVacationScheduleParticipationinTrainingProgrammes6、Message商务便函还可以根据实际需要在末尾增加发信人的姓名首字母、附件、副本抄送等。例SCHOOLOFENGLISHFORBUSINESSMEMORANDUMTo:Mr.Kingswick,CourseCoordinatorFrom:BarnsbyCampbelDate:19November,1995Subject:LessonPlanfor28NovemberLectureIintendtoteachmemowritinginmynextlecture.Iplantocoverthefollowingplans:1.InsideAddressThisisomittedinamemo.Asinternalcommunicationthereasonisobvious.2.GreetingItismerepolitetoputMr.,Mrs.orMsbeforeandtheofficeafterthenameoftherecipientYoumaysometimesaddressthereadersasagroup.3.SubjectThisisaphrasetotellthereaderwhatthememoisabout.SometimesonlythephraseisgivenwithoutthewordSubjectbeforeit.4.BodyTheseshouldbeshort,lessthan10lines,andconcentrateononlyoneparagraphoneideaeach:Sometimesformemoswiththreeormoreparagraphs,itisadvisabletobegineachwithaheadingincapitalletterstotellwhattheparagraphisabout.Anotherpracticeisnumberingtheparagraphsforeasyreferencelateron.5.CarboncopyThisiswrittenasc.c.forshort.Asinaletter,itliststhepersonswhoarealsoreceivingthememo.6.SignatureOnlytheinitialisneeded,Theofficeandnameinprintofthewriterareomitted.Inmorecasualmemosthereisnosignatureatall.无Anythoughtonmynotes?Anythingtoadd?Letmeknowatteabreak.c.c.Mr.P.L.Ducke,TrainingOfficer(二)商务便条商务便条一般有四个组成部分:日期、称呼、正文、签名。一些公司有印好的便条笺。如:MessageTo:Date:MessageTelephoneMessageFor:From:Tel.:Message:Actionrequired:PleasecallbackCallerwillcallbacklaterNoactionrequiredMessagetakenby:DateTime例:让秘书通知推迟约会9a.m.MissWang,I'vegotanurgentmeetingtoday.Pleasecontacttheapplicantstopostponetheinterviewstillfurthernotice.DS分类:1告知信息inform2布置安排arrange3征求意见request4询问信息enquire5求助申请apply6推荐建议suggest1告知信息类无例题:YouareamanageratanauditorscalledGolding&Co.YourcompanyhasjustmergedwithacompetitortobecomeMasonGolding.Youhavebeenaskedtoinformstaffofthechangeofname.Writeamemoof40-50words:*informingstaffofthenewname*tellingthemwhentostartusingthenewname*askingstafftouseonlythenewname...