英语四级模拟作文例一：PartⅠWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledMaltingFriendsOnline.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1．网上交友现象越来截止普遍。2．这种做法有利有弊。3．我的建议。答案:[高分作文]Withawidevarietyofvirtualcommunicationtoolsspringinguplikemushrooms,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeincreasinglyfashionableoverthepastdecade.Thischannelofcommunicationenablespeopletogetacquaintedwithcyberfriendsfromanywherewithoutanylimitations,enrichingtheirlifeexperiencesandevenextendingtheirknowledge.What'smore,itisnotrareforsometofindtheirbosomfriendsandevenMr./Mrs.Right.Butasadouble-edgedsword,makingfriendswithoutphysicallymeetingeachotherundoubtedlyhasevils--tragediesoccurwhencyber-friendsfinallydecidetodate.Notcomingsinglybutinpairs,somespousesgetdivorcedbecauseonepartyfallsinlovewithcyber-lovers.Thenetworkrenderspeopleconvenientandefficientmeanstogetintouchwiththerestoftheworldandweshouldmakegooduseofitinsteadoffallingvictimstoit.[评析]这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。第一段用一句话说明了随着各种各样的(awidevarietyof)虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现(springinguplikemushrooms)，网上交友在过去十年里(overthepastdecade)变得越来越(increasingly)流行。with引导的名词+doing结构是表示原因的经典用法。第二段用What'smore连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有：enablepeopletogetacquaintedwith“使人们结识……”；enrichingexperiences“丰富经验”和extendingknowledge“拓宽知识面”两个短语用了现在分词作伴随状语；itisnotrare表示“并不罕见”，比itiscommon更有力；bosomfriends“知心朋友”；Mr．/Mrs.Right“另一半；心上人”。第三段话锋一转，利用比喻“就像一把双刃剑(asadouble-edgedsword)”，引出了坏处。成语Notcomingsinglybutinpairs“无独有偶”的前后讲了两个坏处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。最后一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们提供了便利、高效的接触外界的手段，我们应该好好利用它，而不应该成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render,convenientandefficientmeans,fallvictimto。例二：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledOnConservingEnergy.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1．能源短缺问题已经非常严重；2．可以采取节能措解决能源短缺问题；3．你的看法。答案:[高分作文]Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernontheseriousproblemofenergyshortage.Manypeopleworrythatenergyresourcesontheearthwillbeexhaustedifweusetheminanuncheckedway.Andtheybelievethattheenergyshortagewillcauseseriousproblemsandevencrisis.Conservingenergyisoneofthemeasureswhichhavebeentakentosolvetheproblemofenergyshortage.Forexample,somecountrieshaveadaylightsavingsystemtouselesselectricityforlighting.Also,somecitieshaveenforcedsomefacilitiesforsavingwateratpublicplacessuchasrestroomsandbars.Stillmore,somehaveenforcedseriouspenaltiesonoveruseofelectricity,water,andfarmingland.Bythesemeans,peoplehopethedrainonenergyresourcescouldbesloweddown.Inaword,itishightimethatseriousconsiderationwasgiventoconservingenergy.Onlythroughimmediateandeffectiveaction,canwehumanbeingssurviveandenjoylifeasdesired.[评析]节能是当前备受关注的一个话题，因此可说的内容很多，紧紧围绕提纲要求进行阐述是本文的鲜明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一个话题中间段概括说明节能是解决能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法介绍了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性。本文词语和句型运用自如。如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first，second等词语，但使...
