2025年英语专四作文讲评及写作指导

TEM4 新题型写作题型变化：Previously：陈说观点—-论证观点—-得出结论Now：概括材料-—提出观点并论证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出提议）材料作文 Tactics：1. 仔细审题，分析材料（2—3mins）2. 列出提纲，确定布局（3—4mins)Para. 1。 引出话题，概括材料(summarize, paraphrase）Para。 2。 提出自身观点，列出理由论证Para。 3. 重申观点或提出提议3. 正式写作(30—35mins）4. 检查并优化(2—3mins）评分原则 怎样总结材料第 一 段 ： Describe the phenomenon/introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides/summarize or paraphrase the topic sentences in the excerpt。参照范文 With Intelligent Machines to Do the Thinking， Will Our Brains Get Lazy？Nowadays ， many aspects of people’s daily life have undergone considerable changes because of the recent development in artificial intelligence 。 Obviously, artificial intelligence has already completely renovated people’s lifestyle. On the one hand ， the contribution of artificial intelligence to the society is prominent and people’s dependence on it is an irreversible trend。 People enjoy the benefits and convenience brought by intelligent machines. On the other hand ， people are still concerned about its negative impact ， for example, whether our brains will regress with intelligent machines to do the thinking.第二段：先表明自己观点Stance: as far as I’m concerned, as to me, from my perspective, in my view， personally speaking， from my point of view再分条论证（灵活运用连接词）1. First and foremost， besides, last but not least2. First, second， third3. In the first place， in the second place, last but not least4. Initially, besides， furthermore， last but not least范文：In my opinion， artificial intelligence will enable our brains to get more creative 。 Admittedly ， a lot of work has been done by intelligent...