第 30 讲 要点作文(2011·全国大纲卷)假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者 2．赞赏该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3．提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意：1．词数 100 左右，开头语已为你写好；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_Mirror!________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours，Li Hua思路点拨：本文为应用文中的书信写作，属传统的指导性写作。写好此文，需注意以下几点：一是时态把握要准确。文章基本时态为一般现在时，同时兼顾其他的时态。二是要点要齐全，且详略得当。题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求，要点作出了明确的规定，这些要点不能有遗漏。写作重点可放在报纸优点的介绍上面。三是切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，使行文连贯流畅。【参考答案】 Dear EditorinChief， Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_Mirror! I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news, so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.【参考答案】 As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours，Li Hua【作文点评】 文章要点齐全，写作层次清楚，时态、语态正确，较好地完成了写作任务。作者能紧扣要点框架适当地增加细节，文中衔接词语，如 first, equally, and, as a young student，等的使用使文章前后连贯，承接自然。倒装句(Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people) ， 非 限 定 性 ...
