2016年全国各地高考英语作文汇总新课标I卷假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)
给外教MSJenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)
词数100左右;2
可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯
示例1DearMsJenkins,I'mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm
I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp
I'mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume
However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatI'veused
Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butI'dbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges
Pleasefindmyapplicationletterandresumeintheattachment
Thankyouforyourkindness
Yours,LiHua示例2DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,IamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationandIalsowantyoutodomeafavor
Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotak