巧用虚拟语气提高作文档次一．用虚拟语气改写以下句子：1.Myteacheradvisedmetoputmyheartintomystudies.2.Itistimeforthemtogooutforrelaxation.3.Iregretwastingsomuchtimeonmeaninglessthings.4.Itisnecessaryforateachertohaveathoroughknowledgeofthesubjectheteaches.5.Myheadteachertreatsmeverywell.6.Ireallywantyoutostayalittlelonger.7.Hehadmeanttogotothecinemawithyou,butoneofhisfriendscametovisithimthen.8.Wedidn’tworkhardandfailedeventually.9.HecametohelpmeandIfulfilledthenewtaskaheadofschedule.二．用虚拟语气拓展要点。1.感谢老师对我的无私帮助。2.父母对“我”过度严格，导致“我”丧失自由，渴望得到解脱。3.“我”后悔过去虚度光阴，以至忽略甚至荒废了学业。三．高考写作中的虚拟语气。1.假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？（2009广东高考）2.假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（2013广东高考）3.假设你是学校校长，谈谈你将如何处理违纪学生，并陈述理由。（2009广州一模）4.假如你是父母一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？参考范文1.IfIwereinthesamepositionastheanimalsinthezoo,Iwouldbestronglyagainstbeingphotographed.Nothavingpeacefulsurroundingstosleepin,Iwouldfeelrathertiredandannoyed.2.Iftherewerenocleanersintheworld,wewouldundoubtedlyliveinamessy,dirtyandsmellyenvironment,whichwouldbadlyaffectourhealth.3.WereIinchargeofaschool,Iwouldalsobeverystrictwiththestudentswhodon’tbehavewell.Iwouldfirstwarnandthensuspendthestudentswhodisturbthelearningofothersordisrespecttheirteachers.Also,itisnecessarythatIvisitthepoorstudents’homeanddiscusstheproblemswiththeirparentssothatwecouldfindsomesolutions.4.IfIwereaparent,Iwouldfirstkeepmychildwellinformedthatlifeisnevereasyandthatheshouldbereadytofaceanydifficulties.Besides,Iwouldexposehimtothehardshipsinlifeinsteadofprotectinghimfromdifficulties,whichwouldprovidehimwithchancestofightforhisbrightfuturebyconqueringchallenges.一．改写句子参考答案：1.MyteacheradvisethatIshouldputmyheartintomystudies.2.Itishightimethattheywentoutforrelaxation.3.IwishIhadn’twastedsomuchtimeonmeaninglessthings.(HowIwish...!)4.Itisnecessarythatateachershouldhaveathoroughknowledgeofthesubjectheteaches.5.Myheadteachertreatsmesowellthatitseemsasifsheweremymother.6.HowIwishyoucould/wouldstayalittlelonger!7.Hewouldhavegonetothecinemawithyouifoneofhisfriendshadn’tcometovisithim.8.Wemighthavesucceededifwehadworkedhard.9.Haditnotbeenforhishelp,Iwouldnothavefulfilledthenewtaskaheadofschedule.Or:Withouthishelp,Iwouldnothavefulfilledthenewtaskaheadofschedule.二．用虚拟语气拓展要点。1.感谢老师对我的无私帮助。Mr.ZhangtreatsmesowellthatitseemsasifIwereherson.Haditnotbeenforherselflessandgeneroushelp,Iwouldhavegivenupmystudyanddroppedoutofschool.HowgratefulIamtoherforherkindness!2.父母对“我”过度严格，导致“我”丧失自由，渴望得到解脱。MyparentsaresohardonmethatitseemsasifIwereabirdconfinedinacagewithoutfreedom.TheyalwaysputpressureonmeandwouldratherIspentallmytimeandenergyonstudies.HowIwishmyparentscouldstandinmyshoesandcometorealizethatIshouldbalancestudywithrelaxation.3.“我”后悔过去虚度光阴，以至忽略甚至荒废了学业。IusedtowastesomuchtimesurfingtheInternetandwatchingTVthatIneglectedmystudytotally.IwishIhadn’twastedsomuchtimeplaying.Instead,Ishouldhavedevotedmyenergytoimprovingmystudies.IfIhadmadeaneffort,Iwouldhavemadegreaterprogress.Now,I’mwellawarethatit’shightimeIfocusedonmystudies.
