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人教课标高一必修1Unit3Unit3TravelJournalUnit3TravelJournalpara1:开门见山,写明自己此次写信来的目的(介绍自己的旅游经历)I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmytripto…..Para2body(具体细节)１、构思:时间:lastweek/lastmonth/yesterday/人物:A、Ｂ、ＣandI…(列举时我“I”要放最后)事件:travelledtoChengdu方式:bytrainLastweekmyparentsandItravelledtoChengdubytrain。2.具体内容(按时间或空间顺序写)Onthefirstday:wewentto…..;onthesecondday:wewentto…..onthethirdday:wewentto去某地旅行,都用goto(wentto)显得太单调变换一下句式:去某地:visit(visited)travelto(travelledto)gotovisit(wenttovisited)payavisitto(paidavisitto)tour(toured)旅行方式bytrain/byair/bysea/goto….onfootPara2body(具体细节)词句推敲去各旅游景点的收获:(即去目的是做/看什么的?)1.接近大自然:getclosetonature2.欣赏美景:enjoythebeautifulsights/scenery3.对名人表达尊敬:showourrespectforsb4.学习某地的历史：learnthehistoryofsomeplaces5.做某事很快乐havefun/agreattimedoingsth.形成段落para2LastweekmyparentsandItravelledtoCheng-dubytrain.Afterwegotoffthetrain,wewenttoMountQingcheng,wherewegotclosetonatureandenjoyedthebeautifulsights.Thenextday,wevisitedDuFu’sThatchedCottagetoshowourrespectforthepoetwhoreallycaredaboutthepoor.Onthethirdday,wetouredDujianyan,whichhasexistedforthousandsofyears(whichhasalonghistoryofthousandsofyears)Para3总结感想和感受Allinall,wehadagreatfungoingsightseeinginChengdu.Ihopeyoucanvisitit(payavisittoit)nexttimeyoucometoChina.Itisreallyabeautifulcity.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.(Ihopetohearfromyousoon).(我希望不久收到你的信。)(Takegoodcareofyourselfandwriteoften)(多保重，常来信。)对于非常正式的书信，开头句是很重要的。另外，信的内容中的每个段落，只能有一个中心思想，这样看信的人可以清楚、明白你所要表达的内容。为了表达的清楚，还要尽可能地用短句，少用长句、难句。段落也宜短不宜长，尤其开头和结尾两段更应简短。Takegoodcareofyourselfandwriteoften.多保重，常来信。Ihopetohearfromyousoon.我希望不久收到你的信。Sayhellotoyourparentsforme.请代我向您父母问好。Takecare!多保重！Bestregards/wishes谨此致意Kindregards致意Yourssincerely您真诚的；...Yoursfaithfully您忠实的…Regards致意ImaginethatyouareafriendofWangKun.WriteashortemailaskingaboutLaos.WhatisthefoodlikeinLaos?Whatdoyouthinkofthecountry?Howwasyourtrip?Haveyoumeet…?Whendidyoucomeback?Whatkindofthingsdidyousee?Couldyougivememoredetailsabout…?Couldyoutellmeabout…?Choosetwoorthreequestionsanduseeachasanewparagraph.Haveanice/goodtime.Havefun.Goodluckonyourjourney.Takecare.Bestwishes.MailAddressSendSpellCheckCancelTo:Subject:WangKunAboutLaosDearWangKun,Howareyouthesedays?Ikeepwonderinghowyoufeelabout…Bestwishes!Yourfriendforever,DearWangKun,Howareyouthesedays?Ikeepworryingaboutyouallthetime.____wasyourtrip?Ithinkyoumust______________.HowhaveagreatfunIdecideto________Laosnextweek.SoIwritetoyoutoasksome___________aboutLaosbecauseIneedtodosome____________.Couldyougiveme___________aboutLaos?IhopeyoutellmesomethingaboutLaos.travelininformationpreparationsmoredetailsBestwishes!YoursMaryDearWangKun,Howareyouthesedays?Ikeepworryingaboutyouallthetime.Howwasyourtrip?Ithinkyoumusthaveagreatfun.IdecidetotravelinLaosnextweek.SoIwritetoyoutoasksomeinformationaboutLaosbecauseIneedtodosomepreparations.CouldyougivememoredetailsaboutLaos?IhopeyoutellmesomethingaboutLaos.Bestwishes!YoursMary•Doyouhavelogicalideas(逻辑)andclearstructure?•Haveyouusedsomeusefulexpressionsanddifferentsentencestructures?.Haveyouusedsomeeffectiveconjunctions(适当的连词)?.Areyousureyoudidn’tmakeanyspellingmistakes?假如你叫芳芳,在因特网上找到了一个叫Joyce的网友,现在请你根据下列要点给Joyce发个e-mail,介绍你自己的一些情况。字数100,可适当增加内容。1.芳芳，中学生，家住在宁夏；2.喜欢集邮和运动；3.对英语很感兴趣，会唱几首英文歌曲；4.班里同学也想找网友（netfriend），希望得到帮助；5.想去英国看看。