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TheAttributiveClause定语从句在写作中的运用Step1:RevisionoftheAttributiveClause1.WhatistheAttributiveclause?2.关系词：关系代词（________________________________)关系副词（_______________________________)3.PracticeoftheAttributiveclause1).Aplaneisamachine___________canfly.2).Thecar____________myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.3).Theman____________iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.4).Thewoman_________yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.5).Isawawoman_______bagwasstolen.6).Thereason______hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7).Istillremembertheday_______IfirstcametoBeijing.8).Itisanimportantday________Iwillneverforget.9).Thepark______theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.10)._____youcansee,heisverysuccessfulasawriter.11).ShealwayscriticizedTom,_______madehimveryunhappy.12).Hepaidtheboy$10forwashingtenwindows,mostof__hadn’tbeencleanedfortenyears.Step2.TheuseofAttributiveclausesinwriting1.Jointhefollowingsentences:1).Iamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchanges.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschooloverthepastthreeyears.2).Thegirlarrangedtohavepianolessonsatthetrainingcenter.Hersisterwaswaitingthere.PracticeⅠ.把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句1)．Lastbutnotleast,Ifeelconfidentoffindingtheverything.Itreallyinterestsme._____________________________________2).Wesympathizedwithourclassmate.Hismotherwasveryillsothatweraisedmoneyforher.____________________________________Ⅱ.改写句子1.“Iseemanyrunningcreatures.Theyaremadeofmetalandglass.Theirfeetareround.Theyhavefoureyes.Twoofthefoureyesarered.InsideIseesoftshapes.Theycanmove.”Iseemanyrunningcreatures（madeofmetalandglass)(withroundfeetandfoureyes).Twoofthefoureyesarered,inwhichIseesoftshapesthatcanmove2.Ourclassisabigfamily;Itconsistsof12girlsand50boys.Mostofthemaremainlyfromthecountryside.ZhaoQiangisakind-heartedboy.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.Ourclassisabigfamily(consistingof12girlsand50boys,mostofwhomaremainlyfromthecountryside.ZhaoQiang,kind-heartedboyandalwaysreadytohelpothers,issuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.写作练习九月16日，深圳，有上千民众上街进行反日游行。民众高呼抵制日货等口号，途中一度焚烧日本国旗。警方出动大批防暴警察和武警维持秩序。游行队伍上午近10点从深圳市中心，日本电器集散地华强北赛格广场（SEGPlaza）出发。人们举起“勿忘国耻（nationalhumiliation）”和保住钓鱼岛等等的横幅高呼口号。日本首相野田佳彦（YoshihikoNoda）的画像被画上红叉。警方一早在华强北戒备，扩音器广播呼吁民众克制。大批武警在深南大道两边铸成人墙（defensivehumanblockades），警力特别集中在礼拜日发生骚乱的市委大院（TheMunicipalpartycommitteecourtyard）门口，以及对面的日本百货商场前的路段。日式餐厅用布蒙住招牌担心受冲击。游行全程有大批警员维持秩序，同时也有警察为示威者开路，多数人都基本保持冷静。anti-JapanesedemonstrationsloganboycottJapanesegoodsriotpoliceandparamilitarypoliceTheparadeparadersbannersarmedpolice写作步骤Step1将文章细分为若干小句子Step2.标出每个句子中出现的的名词成分化简汉语句子突出结构Step3划句成群,将含有重复名词的句子特别是相同主语宾语重复出现的句子分成一组，也要考虑事情发展的时间顺序，文章内部的逻辑关系Step4翻译句子Step5合并句子Step1将文章细分为若干小句子1.九月16日，深圳，有上千民众上街进行反日游行2.民众高呼抵制日货等口号，途中一度焚烧日本国旗。3.警方出动大批防暴警察和武警维持秩序4.游行队伍上午近10点从深圳市中心，日本电器集散地华强北赛格广场出发。5.人们举起“勿忘国耻”和保住钓鱼岛等等的横幅高呼口号。6.日本首相野田佳...