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PhycologydescriptionandactionsdescriptionThecontinuouswriting1.Readandgetmainideas.(5W+H)and(whometwhatproblem).2.Think:;3.writing.Stepsofcontinuouswritingplots(情节);theemotionchangesthegivensentencesphycology,thesurroundingsappearanceactionsconversationIwasoverjoyedandranthreestepsatonce.Flowersaresmilingbrightly,birdsarecryingjoyfully.Myheartisassweetashoney.Herfaceisred,excitementintheheart,asadeerjumpingwithjoy.Laughterlingeredaround(萦绕)theroom.Phycologydescription•1.happinessandenjoymentpersonificationmetaphormixwithsurroundingsHeglaredatmewithburningeyes.Myheadhummed,andmyheartburnedinmychest,andIwantedtopounceonhimandpunchhimhard.Whenheheardthis,heimmediatelyglaredatme,hisfacefullofblueveins.2.AngerIfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.Tearsarerunningdownhercheeklikeariver.Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.Isobbedslowly,myheartfilledwithdespair.It'sraininginmyheart.3.SadnessexaggerationsimileIwassoscaredthatIcouldn'tevengetoutoftheair.Myheartwaspoundinglikearabbitbouncingaroundinmyheart.Myheartseemedtojumpoutofmythroat,mylegsweretooweaktostand,andIalmostfelldownseveraltimes.Sheheldherbreathanddidnotmove.Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.4.FearsShamehitting,thewomankeptsilent,havingnocouragetolookhishusbandintheeye.Guiltandshameflowinginhermind,shedidn'tevendaretowatchherhusbandintheeye,weepinginregret.Ifroze.Icouldfeeltheheatrisingintomycheeks,didIreallyjustdothat?5.RegretHeputhishandoverhismouth.Hiseyeswerewidelyopenforhecouldn'tbelievewhathadhappened.Theshockofthenewsquitetookmybreathaway.Raisemyeyebrow6.Surprise1.couldfeelsweatbeadingonmyforeheadasIwalkedaroundthecorner.2.IhavebutterfliesinmystomacheverytimeIspeakinpublic.3.Mymindwentblank.4.hecouldfeelherpalmssweating,heartbeatracingandbloodrushinginherears.7.Anxiety•1.Whenheheardthis,heimmediatelyglaredatme,hisfacefullofblueveins.Actionsdescription•Hearingthis,heimmediatelyglaredatme,hisfacefullofblueveins.•2.“Here”,hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.•"Here."hesaid,handingthecoinstothegatekeeper.Use–ingformor–edformtoreplacetheclause1.因为被突然的声音吓到了，Lily的身体抖（tremble）了一下。2.他下了车，推开门，看见两年未见的父母在家，激动地热泪盈眶。PracticeFrightenedbythesuddenvoice,Lilytrembled.Hegotoffthedoor,andpushedthedooropen.Seeinghisparentswhohadn’tseenhimfortwoyears,hewassoexcitedthatheburstintotears.