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高三复习写作讲评课Assessment&practiceofWriting高考的考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣一分，重复不计”的新规定，引起考生和家长的极大关注。请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道。（不必翻译新规定内容）问题及分析错别字普遍（电脑普及；作业量大）新规定的影响有助于学生重视母语;有助于学生提高母语水平;你的建议……Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwritting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst.Howdoyougradeit（给分）?Andwhy?Assessment1.Structure2.Content3.LanguageASSESSMENT1.structureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Ifnot,dividethem.Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.2.contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?3.LanguageArethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Ifnot,addsome.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Ifno,replacesome.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifno,usesome.Summary:paragraphstopicsentencedetailstothepoint切题advancedvocabularysentencepatternslinkingwordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfew/nomistake(s)Let’strytoimprovethecomposition.Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst.1.Divideitintoparts:Part2:Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarriesoutanewpolicy.Part3:AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Part1:Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.2.Comeupwiththetopicsentences:Atopicsentencetellsthereaderwhatacertainpartisabout.Part2Part3Inmyopinion,…/AsfarasIamconcerned,…Part1computerhomeworkraisetheawarenessof/attachimportancetohaveapositiveeffecton/beofgreathelpto3.Usekeywordstolistcontents:Whichendingdoyoulikebest?Why?a)Inmyopinion,thepolicyisbeneficialtous.Itmakessenseinprotectingourculture,whichisalsoofgreatbenefittooursociety.b)AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Onlybyhardworkingcanweachieveourgoal.4.Arethecontentstothepoint:…theydon’tcareabouttheirwritting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.writingaremuch5.Findoutthemistakes:…____.____,whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.___,therearemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions.___,theyhavemanyhomeworkeveryday.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.……___,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.___,onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal.A.Thereareseveralreasonsbehind.B.AsfarasIamconcernedC.ForexampleD.AsaresultE.InawordF.MoreoverACDBE6.Addsomelinkingwords:FThecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.7.Improvesomesentences:(advancedvocabulary/...