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英语作文批改书面表达：以“Myopinionon……”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：（1）能写出自己的真实见解；（2）层次清晰，意思连贯；（3）书写工整，卷面整洁；（4）字数70—80词左右。学生作文范文：MyopinionontelevisionTelevisionhascomeintoourlifeformanyyears.Wecan’tlivehappilywithouttelevision.①Itcangiveusthelatestinformationandnews.Itcanopenupoureyesandincreaseourknowledge.Wecangethappinessfromtheplaysontelevision.We’llbeboringalldayifthereisnotelevision.Televisionprogramsareattractive.Afterawholeday’shardworkwecansitbeforethetelevisionanddrinkacupoftea.Howwonderfulitis!②Televisionisalsobadforpeople’shealth.It’sbadforyoutowatchTVtoolong,especiallybadforyoureyes.ItistruethatwatchingTVcaninfluenceourbehavior.However,itdependsonwhatwedo.③Wecan’tchangewhatisonTV,butwecanchoosewhatwewatch.Doyouagree?教师点评：①Welldone!Howwellyoumadethesentence!②Sosmart!Youtellmeyourrealthoughtabouttelevision.③It’sverycleverofyoutoendyourworkwiththisbeautifulsentencethatyouhavelearned!Good!It’sexcellentyouhaven'tmadeanymistakesthistime!I’msogladtoseeyourworkhasimproved!Butit’smuchbettertobecreative.You’dbetterusesomeshortsentencestoinsteadofthelongones.Doyouthinkso?Ihopeyoucanworkharderandmakemoreprogress.Cheerup!